规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời dùng từ nối để làm cho câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn. Ví dụ, bạn có thể bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề, sau đó giải thích lý do cụ thể và kết luận.

範例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, we must wear a uniform and arrive on time. These rules can be strict, and sometimes my friends and I find them challenging to follow throughout the year.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để liên kết ý và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, bạn nên trình bày ý kiến rõ ràng và cụ thể hơn.

範例: Yes, I believe that having more rules can help students correct their mistakes and improve their behavior. However, if there are too many rules, it might become overwhelming and hard to follow.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, đúng ngữ pháp và thêm các chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn.

範例: In my opinion, all my teachers do their jobs well. However, my favorite teacher is my English teacher from secondary school because she helped me improve my English score from 5 to 10 in a short time.

× Yes, there are many rules for students at my school, but the rules that make me and also my friends feel strict and upset Is that the rules about the school time and the uniform?

✓ Yes, there are many rules for students at my school, but the rules that make me and my friends feel strict and upset are the rules about school time and the uniform.

The original sentence has a sentence structure error with incorrect capitalization and verb agreement ('Is' should be 'are'). Also, 'and also my friends' is redundant; 'and my friends' is sufficient. The sentence should be connected properly with the correct verb to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, I think student good benefits more from more rules because it can help students to fix their mistakes and also change their bad behavior.

✓ Yes, I think students benefit more from more rules because they can help students fix their mistakes and also change their bad behavior.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the plural subject. Also, 'good benefits' is incorrect; 'benefit' is the correct verb form here. 'It' should be 'they' to refer to 'rules' (plural). These corrections ensure subject-verb agreement and correct pronoun usage.

× But unfortunately I think that if the there are too many rules, it can be difficult for students to do it.

✓ But unfortunately, I think that if there are too many rules, it can be difficult for students to follow them.

The phrase 'the there are' is incorrect; 'there are' is correct. Also, 'do it' is vague; 'follow them' is more appropriate when referring to rules. This correction fixes the 'there be' issue and clarifies the meaning.

× In my views I think all my teacher are do well her job but I think the best teacher in my heart is the English teacher in my secondary school because she helped me improve quickly my English score from 5 to 10 in my last.

✓ In my view, I think all my teachers do their jobs well, but I think the best teacher in my heart is the English teacher in my secondary school because she helped me quickly improve my English score from 5 to 10 in my last exam.

'In my views' should be 'In my view' (singular). 'All my teacher' should be 'all my teachers' (plural). 'Are do well her job' is incorrect; it should be 'do their jobs well' to match plural subject and possessive pronoun. 'Improve quickly my English score' is awkward; 'quickly improve my English score' is better. Added 'exam' for clarity. These corrections fix subject-verb agreement and improve sentence clarity.