规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally relevant but needs improvement in grammar and clarity. Try to use correct verb forms and plural/singular agreement, and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'student must arrive at the school at time respected teacher', say 'students must arrive on time to respect their teachers, which helps create a positive learning environment.'

範例: At my school, there are several rules designed to help students develop good character and discipline. For instance, students must arrive on time to respect their teachers, which creates a positive learning environment. Without these rules, it would be difficult for students to concentrate and achieve their goals.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Use correct subject-verb agreement and clearer phrases. Also, avoid repetition and improve coherence by using linking words like 'because' and 'therefore'.

範例: I don't think students would benefit from having more rules because they would lose the freedom to do what they enjoy. When students are restricted by too many rules, their creativity decreases, and they may feel more frustrated with school. Therefore, having fewer rules can help students stay motivated and engaged.

建議: Your answer shows appreciation but has grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Use singular/plural forms correctly and avoid repeating words. Also, organize your ideas clearly with linking words. For example, say 'I think all teachers do their jobs well, but especially the kindergarten teacher who helped us learn to write. They are like heroes because they helped us develop essential skills.'

範例: I believe all teachers do their jobs well, but from my perspective, the kindergarten teacher who held our hands and helped us learn to write is especially admirable. They are like heroes because they laid the foundation for our ability to speak and write today.

× At my school, there are many rules to help students develop good character and discipline and to focus on this study.

✓ At my school, there are many rules to help students develop good character and discipline and to focus on their studies.

The phrase 'this study' is incorrect because 'study' in this context should be plural to refer to the general academic work students do. Using 'their studies' correctly refers to the students' academic activities.

× For example, student must arrive at the school at time respected teacher which create a positive learning environment.

✓ For example, students must arrive at school on time to respect teachers, which creates a positive learning environment.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the general subject. 'At time respected teacher' is incorrect; it should be 'on time to respect teachers'. Also, 'create' should be 'creates' to agree with the singular subject 'which' referring to the action.

× Without these rules, it will be difficult for the student to concentrate and achieve their goal.

✓ Without these rules, it will be difficult for students to concentrate and achieve their goals.

'The student' should be plural 'students' to match 'their goal'. Also, 'goal' should be plural 'goals' to agree with plural 'students'.

× I don't think a student will benefit if there are more rules because they don't have freedom to do anything and freedom to do something they like.

✓ I don't think students will benefit if there are more rules because they don't have the freedom to do anything or to do what they like.

'A student' should be plural 'students' to match the plural pronoun 'they'. Also, 'freedom' needs the definite article 'the'. The phrase 'freedom to do anything and freedom to do something they like' is redundant and awkward; it is better to say 'the freedom to do anything or to do what they like'.

× If they are bounded by the rule they they create, creativity decreases as well as their hindrance to the school increases.

✓ If they are bound by the rules they create, creativity decreases as well as their hindrance to the school increases.

'Bounded' is incorrect; the correct past participle is 'bound'. 'Rule' should be plural 'rules' to match 'they create'.

× For example, when a student are given more rules, he or she might be obligated to the school.

✓ For example, when a student is given more rules, he or she might feel obligated to the school.

'Student are' is incorrect; it should be 'student is' to agree in number. Also, 'be obligated to the school' is awkward; 'feel obligated to the school' is more natural.

× I think all the teacher does his or her job very well, but from my perspective the the the teacher who taught us when we were kindergarten by holding our hands and helping us to write are the example of example of the God because they are the reason we are able to stand here and able to speak and write.

✓ I think all the teachers do their jobs very well, but from my perspective, the teachers who taught us when we were in kindergarten by holding our hands and helping us to write are examples of God because they are the reason we are able to stand here and able to speak and write.

'All the teacher' should be plural 'all the teachers'. 'Does' should be 'do' to agree with plural subject. 'His or her job' should be 'their jobs' for plural. 'The teacher who taught us when we were kindergarten' should be 'the teachers who taught us when we were in kindergarten'. 'Are the example of example of the God' is incorrect; it should be 'are examples of God'. 'The God' is incorrect; 'God' does not need an article here.