规则— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Are there any rules for students at your school?
考生
Of course there are. I'm currently studying in at studying at university and we have a number of regulations for students. For instance, we are not allowed to allowed it to brings visitors from outside without permission.
考官
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
考生
Of course, because rules are made in order to protect students. For example, we are not allowed to bring visitors at campus because of our safety. Fundamentally, there are all four students.
考官
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
考生
Yes I do. I I know tons of professors who do their jobs really well. They teaches us tons of things and also they give us an important life lessons. I really I deeply respect them.
評估
總分
Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
分數: 65.0建議: 답변이 다소 중복되고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하며, 중복된 표현을 피하고 문법적으로 정확한 문장을 사용하세요.
範例: Yes, there are several rules at my university. For example, students are not allowed to bring visitors onto campus without permission.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
分數: 55.0建議: 답변이 명확하지 않고 마지막 문장은 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 이유를 구체적으로 설명하고, 문장을 논리적으로 연결하여 명확하게 표현하세요.
範例: Yes, I believe more rules can help protect students. For instance, restricting visitors on campus ensures our safety and prevents disturbances.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
分數: 60.0建議: 중복된 단어 사용과 문법 오류가 있습니다. 문장을 간결하게 만들고, 동사 형태와 단수/복수 일치를 주의하세요.
範例: Yes, I have several professors who do their jobs very well. They teach us many things and also provide important life lessons. I deeply respect them.
文法
× I'm currently studying in at studying at university and we have a number of regulations for students.
✓ I'm currently studying at university and we have a number of regulations for students.
중복된 'studying in at studying at' 구문이 문법적으로 잘못되었습니다. 'studying at university'가 올바른 표현입니다. 'study at university'는 대학에서 공부한다는 의미로, 전치사 'at'과 함께 사용됩니다.
× we are not allowed to allowed it to brings visitors from outside without permission.
✓ we are not allowed to bring visitors from outside without permission.
'allowed it to brings'는 문법적으로 틀렸습니다. 'allowed to' 다음에는 동사 원형이 와야 하며, 'brings'는 3인칭 단수 현재형으로 부적절합니다. 따라서 'allowed to bring'가 올바른 표현입니다.
× we are not allowed to bring visitors at campus because of our safety.
✓ we are not allowed to bring visitors on campus because of our safety.
'bring visitors at campus'에서 전치사 'at'은 부적절하며, 'on campus'가 올바른 표현입니다. 'on campus'는 캠퍼스 내에서라는 의미로 자주 사용됩니다.
× Fundamentally, there are all four students.
✓ Fundamentally, there are four students in total.
'there are all four students'는 문장 구조가 부자연스럽고 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 'there are four students in total'로 수정하여 전체 학생 수를 명확히 표현하는 것이 좋습니다.
× They teaches us tons of things and also they give us an important life lessons.
✓ They teach us tons of things and also they give us important life lessons.
'They'는 복수 주어이므로 동사에 '-s'를 붙이지 않습니다. 따라서 'teaches'는 'teach'로 수정되어야 하며, 'an important life lessons'에서 'an'은 단수 관사이므로 복수 명사 'lessons'와 맞지 않아 삭제해야 합니다.
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