规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cavabınızda qrammatik səhvlər və təbii ifadə çatışmazlığı var. Məsələn, "don't wearing makeup" əvəzinə "not wearing makeup" demək daha düzgündür. Həmçinin, cavabınızı daha aydın və qısa cümlələrlə ifadə edin və mövzunu birbaşa cavablandırın.

範例: Yes, there are several rules for students at my school. For example, we must wear uniforms, avoid wearing makeup, and be punctual for lessons.

建議: Cavabınızda fikirlərinizi daha aydın və strukturlaşdırılmış şəkildə ifadə etməlisiniz. "I just wanna say" kimi qeyri-rəsmi ifadələrdən çəkinin və cümlələri daha qısa və məntiqli edin. Əlavə olaraq, əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin.

範例: I believe that students need a balance. While rules are important to maintain order, too many rules can limit students' freedom and creativity.

建議: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və anlaşılmaz ifadələr var. Məsələn, "he always explain us" əvəzinə "he always explains the lessons to us" demək daha düzgündür. Cavabınızı daha sadə və aydın ifadələrlə verin və əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin.

範例: Yes, I have a history teacher who does his job very well. He explains the lessons clearly and encourages us to think critically during tests. Also, he often has useful conversations with us, which helps me learn better.

× Yes, there are a lot of rules all over the world for students at school.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of rules for students at school.

The phrase 'all over the world' is unnecessary and incorrect in this context because the question is about rules at your school, not worldwide. Removing it clarifies the sentence.

× For example, wearing uniform, don't wearing makeup, and don't be late to the lessons.

✓ For example, wearing a uniform, not wearing makeup, and not being late to lessons.

The noun 'uniform' requires the indefinite article 'a' because it is singular and countable. Also, 'don't wearing' is incorrect; it should be 'not wearing' to form the correct negative gerund phrase. 'Don't be late to the lessons' should be 'not being late to lessons' for parallel structure and correct gerund use.

× From my perspective, I just wanna say that this question has 2 answers, both yes and no.

✓ From my perspective, I just want to say that this question has two answers, both yes and no.

The informal contraction 'wanna' should be replaced with 'want to' in formal speech. Also, numbers under ten are usually written in words in formal writing, so '2' becomes 'two'.

× School must give students freedom too.

✓ Schools must give students freedom too.

The singular noun 'School' is incorrect here because the statement refers generally to all schools. The plural 'Schools' is appropriate to express this generalization.

× But on the other hand school, every school must have their its own rules too.

✓ But on the other hand, every school must have its own rules too.

The phrase 'their its' is redundant and incorrect; 'its' is the correct possessive pronoun for the singular noun 'school'. Also, a comma is needed after 'on the other hand' for correct punctuation.

× He always explain us the lesson, he thinking with us with the test and he may useful conversation with us.

✓ He always explains the lesson to us, he thinks with us during the test, and he may have useful conversations with us.

The verbs 'explain' and 'think' need to be in the third person singular form 'explains' and 'thinks' to agree with the subject 'He'. Also, 'explain us' is incorrect; the correct structure is 'explain something to someone'. 'He may useful conversation' is ungrammatical; it should be 'he may have useful conversations'.