规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“ruthless students”应为“strict rules”，以及“depends”应为“depend”。建议注意主谓一致和词汇准确性，同时回答应更直接，避免冗长。

範例: There are not many strict rules at my university because we are expected to be self-disciplined, unlike in primary or secondary school where rules are more necessary.

建議: 回答结构较好，但表达略显重复且不够流畅。建议使用更多连接词使句子更连贯，同时丰富细节，举例说明规则的利弊。

範例: I think it depends on the student. For example, some students struggle with time management, so rules can help them stay organized. However, others might feel that too many rules limit their freedom and creativity.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，如“help me out and become outstanding more”表达不清。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和主谓一致，并具体说明老师如何帮助你。

範例: Yes, I remember a primary school teacher who helped me a lot. Since I was very introverted and rarely spoke at school, she encouraged me to participate more, which improved my confidence and performance.

× There are not many ruthless students at my school because we are now already university students so we depends on our self disciplines rather than obeying any rules like in secondary or even primary school.

✓ There are not many ruthless students at my school because we are now already university students so we depend on our self-discipline rather than obeying any rules like in secondary or even primary school.

主谓不一致错误。主语是复数“we”，谓语动词应使用复数形式“depend”，而不是“depends”。此外，self disciplines应为单数形式self-discipline。建议注意主语和谓语的一致性。

× There are not many ruthless students at my school because we are now already university students so we depends on our self disciplines rather than obeying any rules like in secondary or even primary school.

✓ There are not many ruthless students at my school because we are now already university students so we depend on our self-discipline rather than obeying any rules like in secondary or even primary school.

quantifiers使用错误。self disciplines应为不可数名词self-discipline，不能用复数形式。建议使用正确的不可数名词形式。

× I think it depends. Some of the students may be not good at time management or not good at discipline, so that's why rules are important or essential for them.

✓ I think it depends. Some of the students may not be good at time management or discipline, so that's why rules are important or essential for them.

quantifiers使用错误。may be not应改为may not be，否定词位置错误。建议将否定词放在情态动词后面。

× Yes, one primary teacher is very memorable in my experience because I'm a very and very introvert person that I rarely talk at school but that teacher help me out and become outstanding more in my school life.

✓ Yes, one primary teacher is very memorable in my experience because I'm a very introverted person who rarely talks at school, but that teacher helped me out and helped me become more outstanding in my school life.

代词使用错误。that teacher help应为that teacher helped，主谓不一致且时态错误。introvert应为形容词introverted。who用于引导定语从句修饰person。建议注意代词和时态的正确使用。

× Yes, one primary teacher is very memorable in my experience because I'm a very and very introvert person that I rarely talk at school but that teacher help me out and become outstanding more in my school life.

✓ Yes, one primary teacher is very memorable in my experience because I'm a very introverted person who rarely talks at school, but that teacher helped me out and helped me become more outstanding in my school life.

时态错误。描述过去发生的事情时，动词应使用过去式helped，而不是现在式help。建议根据时间背景正确使用时态。