规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时应避免重复表达，且语言更自然流畅。例如，'many different kinds of rules'可以简化为'many rules'。此外，'restrict people's life'表达不够地道，可以改为'limit students' freedom'。

範例: Yes, there are many rules at my school. I believe most of them are beneficial because they help maintain order, but some rules can be a bit restrictive and limit students' freedom.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如'more roots'应为'more rules'，且表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免语法错误，并且逻辑更连贯。

範例: Absolutely not. I believe that adding more rules won't help students improve. Instead, they should have more free time to pursue their interests, which can help them feel more secure and motivated.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，如'she always can help'应为'she can always help'，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和语法，并且表达更清晰。

範例: Yes, one of my university teachers does her job very well. She is kind and always helps students improve their skills in class. Moreover, she offers support to students in their personal lives.

× I think some rules also restrict people's life.

✓ I think some rules also restrict people's lives.

life是不可数名词时表示生命，但在这里指的是人们的生活，应使用复数形式lives。

× I think more roots can't help people to be a better person.

✓ I think more rules can't help people to be better persons.

roots应为rules，且表达“成为更好的人”时，people后不加冠词，且person应复数persons或people。

× they need to more sense of security from that.

✓ they need to have more sense of security from that.

动词need后应接动词不定式have，缺少have导致语法错误。

× one of my university teacher do her job very well,

✓ one of my university teachers does her job very well,

one of后接复数名词teachers，谓语动词应与主语one保持单数形式，故用does。

× she always can help people to improve their ability to her class

✓ she can always help people improve their abilities in her class

动词help后直接接动词原形improve，不用to；ability应复数abilities；介词to her class应改为in her class。

× and plus they actually give some assistance for people in their life.

✓ and they actually give some assistance to people in their lives.

and plus重复连接词，应去掉plus；介词for改为to；life应为复数形式lives。