规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“rolls”应为“rules”，“bring the smartphone along us”应为“bring smartphones with us”。建议注意单词拼写和语法结构，避免重复和不完整的句子。

範例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to bring smartphones to class. This helps minimize distractions and improve focus during lessons.

建議: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“rules which settled by school”应为“rules set by the school”，且表达较为模糊。建议使用更准确的语法和具体的例子来支持观点。

範例: Yes, I believe more rules can benefit students. For instance, rules about punctuality can help students develop discipline and avoid problems caused by being late.

建議: 回答中存在重复词汇和语法错误，如“a a”重复，“keeps study for the bad”表达不清。建议简洁明了地描述老师的特点，并使用正确的时态和表达。

範例: Yes, I had a voice and speech teacher at university who was very professional. She was always eager to learn new methods to improve her teaching skills.

× Yes, of course, we do have a lot of rolls in our school.

✓ Yes, of course, we do have a lot of rules in our school.

单词“rolls”应为“rules”，因为这里指的是“规则”，而不是“卷”或“名单”。这是单复数错误，正确的单词是“rules”。

× we can't bring the smartphone along us when we were in secondary or primary school.

✓ we can't bring smartphones with us when we were in secondary or primary school.

短语“bring the smartphone along us”中，应该用“with us”表示“带着我们”，且“smartphone”应为复数形式“smartphones”，因为泛指多部手机。

× we can't bring the smartphone along us when we were in secondary or primary school.

✓ we couldn't bring smartphones with us when we were in secondary or primary school.

句子中描述过去的情况，助动词“can't”应改为过去式“couldn't”，以保持时态一致。

× And moreover.

✓ Moreover,

“And moreover.”是不完整的句子，且“and”和“moreover”都表示连接，不能连用。应去掉“and”，并将“Moreover”作为句首连接词使用。

× Sometimes the rules which settled by school will help them to develop their personality or keep them from the dangerous things.

✓ Sometimes the rules which are set by the school will help them to develop their personality or keep them from dangerous things.

“which settled by school”缺少被动语态助动词“are”，应为“which are set by the school”。“the dangerous things”中“the”不必要，应去掉。

× Sometimes the rules which settled by school will help them to develop their personality or keep them from the dangerous things.

✓ Sometimes the rules which are set by the school will help them to develop their personality or keep them from dangerous things.

“dangerous things”前不需要定冠词“the”，因为这里泛指危险的事物。

× Yes I have, I used to have a a voice and speech teacher in my university.

✓ Yes, I have. I used to have a voice and speech teacher at my university.

“a a”重复，应去掉一个“a”。“in my university”应改为“at my university”，表示在某个学校。

× She was already a a professional professor professor in her area but she still keeps study for the bad.

✓ She was already a professional professor in her area, but she still keeps studying for the better.

“a a professional professor professor”重复，应去掉重复词。动词“keeps study”应改为“keeps studying”，动名词形式。短语“for the bad”不合适，应改为“for the better”，表示“为了更好”。