规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答较简短，缺乏细节和连贯性。建议增加更多具体细节，并使用连接词使回答更自然流畅。

範例: Yes, at my school, students are required to be punctual for their classes to ensure that lessons start on time and everyone can benefit fully from the teaching.

建議: 回答不够清晰，表达含糊且语法错误较多。建议明确表达观点，使用恰当的连接词，并避免口语化词汇。

範例: I think it depends on the situation. If the rules are too strict, they might help students develop independence, but overly harsh rules could also be counterproductive.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议使用完整句子，避免口语化表达，并提供更多具体细节。

範例: Yes, my French teacher is very dedicated. He works hard and is an early riser, waking up early every day to prepare lessons thoroughly.

× Yes, in my school students should be on time at their classes.

✓ Yes, in my school students should be on time for their classes.

介词短语中，表示“准时参加课程”应使用介词“for”，而不是“at”。“on time for their classes”是正确搭配。

× if the rules are so harsh, it may be for student development and independent.

✓ if the rules are so harsh, it may be for student development and independence.

“independent”是形容词，句中需要名词形式来表达“独立性”，应使用“independence”。

× Guess I have a teacher who does his job quite well as my French teacher.

✓ I guess I have a teacher who does his job quite well as my French teacher.

句子缺少主语“I”，应完整表达为“I guess”。

× He's a very hardworking and I think he's that kind of early person.

✓ He's very hardworking and I think he's that kind of early person.

“hardworking”是形容词，前面不需要冠词“a”，应直接使用“very hardworking”。

× He gets up very early every day and every week.

✓ He gets up very early every day and every week.

此句语法正确，无需修改。