规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中有語法錯誤，且表達不夠自然。建議使用正確的句型來描述規則，並避免重複或冗長的表達。可以嘗試用簡潔且清楚的句子說明規定，例如直接說明禁止攜帶酒精飲料，並指出允許的飲品種類。

範例: Yes, at my school, students are not allowed to bring alcoholic drinks. The only beverages permitted are water and soft drinks.

建議: 回答中有語法和拼寫錯誤，且表達不夠流暢。建議使用連接詞使句子更連貫，並用更準確的詞彙表達意見。可以具體說明規則如何限制創意，並用正確的時態和語法。

範例: Definitely not. I believe that more rules would limit students' creativity. For example, if the school forbids students from dyeing their hair, they might feel bored and unable to express themselves through their hairstyles.

建議: 回答中有語法錯誤和用詞不當，且句子結構不完整。建議使用正確的動詞形式和詞彙，並清楚描述老師的特質和行為。使用連接詞使句子更流暢。

範例: There are several teachers at my school who do their jobs very well. For example, my class teacher is kind to everyone and always ensures our safety while guiding us in the right direction.

× Absolutely, in my school is prohibit that student cannot bring any alcohol drinks to school as a resale.

✓ Absolutely, in my school it is prohibited that students cannot bring any alcoholic drinks to school for resale.

The original sentence lacks the correct form of 'there is' or 'it is' to introduce the statement, and 'prohibit' should be in the passive form 'is prohibited'. Also, 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the context, and 'alcohol drinks' should be 'alcoholic drinks'. 'As a resale' is incorrect; 'for resale' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× Absolutely, in my school is prohibit that student cannot bring any alcohol drinks to school as a resale.

✓ Absolutely, in my school it is prohibited that students cannot bring any alcoholic drinks to school for resale.

The noun 'student' should be plural 'students' because it refers to all students in the school. Also, 'alcohol drinks' should be 'alcoholic drinks' to correctly describe the drinks.

× The only thing we can drink is beverage and water.

✓ The only things we can drink are beverages and water.

'Beverage' should be plural 'beverages' to match 'things', and the verb should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject. Also, 'beverage' is a countable noun here.

× Definitely not. I think more role will limited students creativity.

✓ Definitely not. I think more rules will limit students' creativity.

'Role' should be plural 'rules' to match the meaning. 'Limited' should be 'limit' to agree with the future tense modal 'will'. Also, 'students creativity' needs a possessive apostrophe: 'students' creativity'.

× For example, if school prohibits students to dye their hair, they were boring and cannot have any new idea in their hairstyle.

✓ For example, if the school prohibits students from dyeing their hair, they are bored and cannot have any new ideas about their hairstyle.

'Prohibits' is correct in present tense for a general statement, but 'to dye' should be 'from dyeing' to use the correct verb + -ing form after 'prohibit'. 'They were boring' is incorrect; it should be 'they are bored' to describe their feeling. 'Idea' should be plural 'ideas', and 'in their hairstyle' should be 'about their hairstyle'.

× For example, if school prohibits students to dye their hair, they were boring and cannot have any new idea in their hairstyle.

✓ For example, if the school prohibits students from dyeing their hair, they are bored and cannot have any new ideas about their hairstyle.

The verb 'prohibit' is followed by 'from' plus the gerund form of the verb, so 'prohibits students to dye' is incorrect; it should be 'prohibits students from dyeing'. Also, 'in their hairstyle' is better expressed as 'about their hairstyle'.

× There are several teachers in my school doing their job pretty good.

✓ There are several teachers in my school who do their job pretty well.

The phrase 'doing their job pretty good' is incorrect; 'good' is an adjective but an adverb 'well' is needed to modify the verb 'do'. Also, 'doing' should be 'who do' to form a relative clause describing the teachers.

× There are several teachers in my school doing their job pretty good.

✓ There are several teachers in my school doing their job pretty well.

The adverb 'well' should be used instead of the adjective 'good' to correctly modify the verb phrase 'doing their job'.

× For example, the matter of my class is nice to everyone and she will take care of everyone's safe and make sure we are in the right route.

✓ For example, the teacher of my class is nice to everyone and she will take care of everyone's safety and make sure we are on the right route.

'The matter of my class' is incorrect; it should be 'the teacher of my class'. 'Everyone's safe' should be 'everyone's safety' as 'safe' is an adjective, but a noun is needed here. Also, 'in the right route' should be 'on the right route' as the correct preposition for 'route' is 'on'.