规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and completeness. Try to form full sentences and avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Provide a clear topic sentence and add specific details about the rules. For example, mention the uniform colours and any other important rules briefly.

範例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students must wear a uniform, which consists of dark blue clothes. Additionally, we have rules about punctuality and behaviour to maintain discipline.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and repetitive. Avoid repeating words and finish your thoughts clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Provide specific reasons why a balance of rules is important.

範例: In my opinion, schools must have rules to create a better learning environment. However, there should be a balance because too many strict rules can make students feel restricted and less motivated.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Avoid repeating phrases and irrelevant information. Provide a clear topic sentence and specific examples of why you think your teacher is good at their job.

範例: Yes, I have a teacher who does her job very well. She is very dedicated and explains lessons clearly, which helps students understand difficult topics easily.

× Uh, yes, in my school has a lot of rules like uh, uniform for school.

✓ Uh, yes, my school has a lot of rules, like a uniform policy.

The original sentence lacks a proper subject for the verb 'has'. 'In my school has' is incorrect; it should be 'my school has'. Also, 'uniform for school' is vague; 'uniform policy' is clearer. The sentence structure is corrected to have a clear subject and verb.

× Uh, we were umm, blue, dark blue clothes and uh, we.

✓ Uh, we wear dark blue clothes.

The original sentence uses 'were' incorrectly to describe clothing. The correct verb is 'wear' to indicate what clothes students have. Also, 'blue, dark blue clothes' is redundant; 'dark blue clothes' suffices. The sentence is incomplete and corrected for clarity and grammar.

× In my opinion, in school must must have own rules because it can help create a better learning environment.

✓ In my opinion, schools must have their own rules because they can help create a better learning environment.

The sentence incorrectly repeats 'must' and omits the subject 'schools'. Also, 'own rules' needs a possessive pronoun 'their'. The modal verb 'must' is used correctly but should not be repeated. The correction clarifies subject and possessive pronoun usage.

× But in spite of this, I think they need a balance between between strict rules because it can.

✓ But despite this, I think there needs to be a balance regarding strict rules because they can...

The phrase 'in spite of this' is acceptable but 'despite this' is more concise. The repetition of 'between' is an error. The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. 'Balance between strict rules' is awkward; 'balance regarding strict rules' or 'a balance in strictness' is better. Also, 'it can' is vague and incomplete.

× Yes, it's my teacher. She's keen on job and she does her, she does her old job very well.

✓ Yes, it's my teacher. She's keen on her job and she does her job very well.

The phrase 'keen on job' lacks the possessive pronoun 'her'. The repetition 'she does her, she does her old job' is redundant and 'old job' is unclear. The correction removes redundancy and adds the possessive pronoun for clarity.