规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 답변이 다소 불명확하고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 예를 들어, 'I don't know why it's still maintaining this'는 자연스럽지 않은 표현입니다. 좀 더 명확하고 자연스러운 문장으로 바꾸고, 추가적인 세부사항을 덧붙여 답변을 풍부하게 만드는 것이 좋습니다.

範例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must wear a school uniform every day. This rule helps maintain discipline and a sense of unity among students.

建議: 문법 오류와 중복 표현('help them to help them')이 있습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 다듬고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 연결어를 사용하여 답변을 개선하세요.

範例: Yes, I believe more rules can help students develop responsibility. For instance, rules about punctuality and respect encourage good habits that are useful in society.

建議: 답변이 비교적 자연스럽지만, 문장 연결이 다소 단절되어 있습니다. 연결어를 사용해 문장들을 더 유기적으로 연결하고, 구체적인 예시를 추가하면 더 좋습니다.

範例: Yes, my English teacher, Dimitri Rosopoulos, was excellent. He was very patient and always listened carefully to students. Moreover, he gave me useful advice on how to improve my English speaking skills.

× There are quite a lot of rules for students in the school.

✓ There are quite a lot of rules for students at the school.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to rules applying to students at a school. The correct preposition is 'at' to indicate location or association with the school.

× The most common rules are students have to wear a school uniform.

✓ The most common rules are that students have to wear a school uniform.

The sentence lacks the conjunction 'that' to properly connect the clause explaining the rules. Adding 'that' clarifies the sentence structure and improves grammatical correctness.

× I don't know why it's still maintaining this.

✓ I don't know why it is still maintained.

The verb 'maintaining' is incorrectly used here. The correct form is the passive voice 'is still maintained' to indicate that the rule or policy continues to be upheld.

× school need to help them to help them to become a better person by restricting or regulating with some rules.

✓ school needs to help them to become better people by restricting or regulating with some rules.

The subject 'school' is singular and requires the singular verb 'needs'. Also, 'a better person' should be plural 'better people' to agree with the plural pronoun 'them'.

× school need to help them to help them to become a better person by restricting or regulating with some rules.

✓ school needs to help them become better people by restricting or regulating some rules.

The preposition 'with' is unnecessary after 'regulating'. The verb 'regulate' directly takes the object 'some rules' without a preposition.

× I can remember his name, Dimitri Rosopoulos.

✓ I can't remember his name, Dimitri Rosopoulos.

The phrase 'I can remember' contradicts the context where the student likely means they do not remember the name. 'Can't' is the correct modal verb to express inability.

× He was a really gentle person who always listened to students, and he always gave me advice to speak English very well.

✓ He was a really gentle person who always listened to students, and he always gave me advice on speaking English very well.

The verb 'gave advice' is typically followed by the preposition 'on' when referring to the subject of the advice. Also, 'to speak' should be changed to the gerund 'speaking' after 'advice on'.