规则— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Are there any rules for students at your school?
考生
Yeah, umm, I must say yes because my school rules are very strict on, for example, they always, umm, tell us uh, sleep before 11:00.
考官
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
考生
Uh, I think it depends on which rules. Uh, you, you know, in my school, uh, the school required us to go to bed before 11:00. Umm, other, well, they, umm, they will cut or score. So I think it's not, not good, it's so bad. But other routes are very good for us.
考官
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
考生
Yeah, I have a teacher. Her name is Molly. It's my Chinese teacher. She is a very, very good teacher. I saw in my life she always help me and in the study she always told me to go to their office and help.
評估
總分
Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答中有较多的语气词和重复，显得不够自然流畅。建议减少填充词，直接表达观点，并补充具体细节使回答更丰富。
範例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students must go to bed before 11:00 PM to ensure they get enough rest for the next day.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
分數: 50.0建議: 回答缺乏条理，表达不清晰且有重复。建议明确表达观点，使用连接词组织语言，并具体说明哪些规则有益，哪些不利。
範例: I believe it depends on the type of rules. Some rules, like having a fixed bedtime, help students stay healthy, but strict punishments for minor mistakes can be harmful.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
分數: 55.0建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和主谓一致，并具体说明老师的优点。
範例: Yes, I have a teacher named Molly who teaches Chinese. She is very helpful and always encourages me to visit her office for extra help with my studies.
文法
× I must say yes because my school rules are very strict on, for example, they always, umm, tell us uh, sleep before 11:00.
✓ I must say yes because my school rules are very strict; for example, they always tell us to sleep before 11:00.
动词后面接动词不定式时，应该用“to + 动词原形”，这里“tell us to sleep”是正确用法，而不是直接用动词原形。
× the school required us to go to bed before 11:00.
✓ the school requires us to go to bed before 11:00.
这里描述的是现在的规则，应该用一般现在时，且主语是第三人称单数，动词用第三人称单数形式“requires”。
× she always help me and in the study she always told me to go to their office and help.
✓ she always helps me and in the study she always tells me to go to her office and help.
主语是第三人称单数，动词应加-s变为“helps”和“tells”。另外，“their office”应改为“her office”，因为指的是单数女性老师。
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