规则— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Are there any rules for students at your school?
考生
I currently don't go to school but there were rules for the students when I did used to work, so the we had a uniform which we had to wear on a regular basis and we were not allowed to talk loudly in the corridors.
考官
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
考生
Yes, I do think that students benefit from rules because if they learn rules and regulations at a younger age, then they gain the understanding of life and how things don't go always their way.
考官
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
考生
When I was doing my bachelors, there was a teacher that I liked a lot. Her name was Sherry Ma'am. She was a very great teacher. Whenever I had any sort of doubt, she would clear it for me. And she was a teacher who had a very set, very good set of rules and regulations for all the students in our class. That is one of the reasons I liked her.
評估
總分
Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
分數: 70.0建議: Your answer is relevant but a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question about school rules, avoid mixing work and school experiences, and keep your sentences concise and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.
範例: When I was in school, there were several rules. For example, we had to wear a uniform every day, and talking loudly in the corridors was not allowed. These rules helped maintain discipline among students.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
分數: 80.0建議: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by adding linking words and more specific supporting details. Also, try to avoid redundancy and make your sentences more natural.
範例: Yes, I believe students benefit from having more rules. For instance, learning rules early helps them understand discipline and prepares them for real-life challenges where things may not always go their way.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
分數: 85.0建議: Your answer is detailed and relevant but can be improved by using linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly and avoid repetition. Also, try to combine sentences to make your response more concise and natural.
範例: During my bachelor's degree, I had a teacher named Sherry Ma'am who did her job very well. She was always ready to clear my doubts, and she maintained strict rules in the class, which helped create a disciplined learning environment. That's why I admired her teaching style.
文法
× I currently don't go to school but there were rules for the students when I did used to work, so the we had a uniform which we had to wear on a regular basis and we were not allowed to talk loudly in the corridors.
✓ I currently don't go to school but there were rules for the students when I used to work, so we had a uniform which we had to wear on a regular basis and we were not allowed to talk loudly in the corridors.
The phrase 'did used to work' is incorrect because 'did' is already the past tense auxiliary, so the main verb should be in base form 'use'. The correct form is 'used to work' or 'did use to work'. Here, 'used to work' is appropriate. Also, 'the we had' contains an extra 'the' which is a typographical error and should be removed.
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