规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 文法の誤り（例えば、"her"の誤用や動詞の一致）を修正し、より自然で正確な英語表現を使うことが重要です。また、冗長な表現を避け、簡潔に答える練習をしましょう。

範例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students must not be late for their morning classes. In addition, we are required to clean our classrooms after lessons. These rules help maintain discipline and a clean environment.

建議: 文法と語彙の誤りを直し、より明確で論理的な説明を心がけましょう。接続詞を使って文をつなげ、具体的な理由や例を加えると良いです。

範例: Yes, I believe more rules can benefit students. For example, certain rules teach us how to cooperate with others, which is essential for our future careers and social life.

建議: 文法の誤り（例えば、"strategy"の単数・複数の使い方や前置詞の誤用）を修正し、より自然な表現を使いましょう。また、接続詞を使って文を滑らかにつなげると良いです。

範例: One of my high school teachers, Mr. Ogawa, was excellent. He not only taught the subject well but also shared useful strategies to succeed in entrance exams. Thanks to his guidance, I was able to enter my desired university.

× students are not allowed to be late for her morning class.

✓ students are not allowed to be late for their morning classes.

The pronoun 'her' is incorrectly used to refer to 'students', which is plural and gender-neutral. The correct possessive pronoun is 'their' to match the plural noun 'students'.

× students have to have clean their classroom after her classes.

✓ students have to clean their classroom after their classes.

The phrase 'have to have clean' is incorrect; it should be 'have to clean'. Also, 'her classes' should be 'their classes' to agree with the plural subject 'students'.

× These rules is very essential for us.

✓ These rules are very essential for us.

The subject 'rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× Pulling some rules teaching students how to cooperate with others, which is very essential for preparing in the future.

✓ Having some rules teaches students how to cooperate with others, which is very essential for preparing for the future.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Pulling some rules' is incorrect; it should be 'Having some rules'. Also, the verb form and sentence structure need correction to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× He not only taught the subject well but also told us useful strategy to succeed in entrance exam.

✓ He not only taught the subject well but also told us useful strategies to succeed in the entrance exam.

The noun 'strategy' should be plural 'strategies' to match the context. Also, 'entrance exam' requires the definite article 'the' to specify the particular exam.

× Thanks to him, I was able to enter to my desired university.

✓ Thanks to him, I was able to enter my desired university.

The verb 'enter' does not require the preposition 'to'. The correct form is 'enter' followed directly by the object.