规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lặp lại và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể hơn về các quy tắc tại trường.

範例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must attend classes on time and respect their teachers. These rules help create a positive learning environment and improve students' discipline.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa hoàn chỉnh và thiếu sự liên kết logic. Bạn nên phát triển ý tưởng rõ ràng hơn, sử dụng từ nối để kết nối các ý và tránh ngắt quãng giữa chừng.

範例: Yes, I think more rules can benefit students because they encourage good habits like punctuality and healthy living. For instance, strict attendance rules can motivate students to arrive on time, which improves their learning experience.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu chi tiết cụ thể. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và mô tả rõ hơn về giáo viên để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

範例: Yes, I have an English teacher who is very dedicated. She is kind to all students and loves her job. Every time I enter the classroom, she greets everyone warmly, which makes the class enjoyable.

× I think it's compulsory for school because school is a place which education is very important for a student is how students learn and improve their social skills or awareness. Many people.

✓ I think it's compulsory for school because school is a place where education is very important for students to learn and improve their social skills or awareness.

The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper structure. 'which education is very important' should be 'where education is very important' to correctly introduce the relative clause. Also, 'for a student is how students learn' is unclear and redundant; it should be rephrased to 'for students to learn'. The sentence needs to be clearer and more coherent.

× Yes, I believe that having more rules at school can help students develop good hobbies, such as arriving on time or staying healthy.

✓ Yes, I believe that having more rules at school can help students develop good habits, such as arriving on time or staying healthy.

The word 'hobbies' is incorrect in this context; 'habits' is the appropriate term when referring to behaviors like punctuality and health. This is a vocabulary choice issue affecting sentence meaning and clarity.

× For example, St. Rules about attendance might encourage students to be more punctual.

✓ For example, strict rules about attendance might encourage students to be more punctual.

'St. Rules' is unclear and likely a typo or incomplete phrase. It should be 'strict rules' to convey the intended meaning. Correct word choice is necessary for clarity.

× Yes, I have a teacher who does her job very well. It's my miss and my English teacher.

✓ Yes, I have a teacher who does her job very well. She is my teacher and my English teacher.

The phrase 'It's my miss' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'She is my teacher' or 'She is my English teacher' to be grammatically correct and clear.

× She's very kind of student and she's very love her job.

✓ She's very kind to students and she loves her job very much.

'Kind of student' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'kind to students'. Also, 'she's very love her job' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'she loves her job very much'. Proper adjective and verb usage is necessary here.

× When I come to class she always says hi from everyone and she's.

✓ When I come to class, she always says hi to everyone and she's very friendly.

The phrase 'says hi from everyone' is incorrect; it should be 'says hi to everyone'. The sentence is incomplete and needs a proper ending to be clear and grammatically correct.