规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱，表达不自然。建议回答时先直接回答问题，然后用一到两句具体细节支持，避免断句错误和语法错误。

範例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to use smartphones during lessons, which helps us focus better on our studies.

建議: 回答内容不清晰，语法错误较多，缺乏逻辑连贯性。建议先明确表达观点，再用具体例子或原因支持，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: I don't think more rules would help students. When I was in high school, there were already many rules, but some students still tried to break them.

建議: 回答不完整且语法错误严重，表达不清楚。建议先明确回答问题，介绍老师的名字或称呼，然后具体说明老师做得好的方面，使用完整句子。

範例: Yes, I have a teacher named Ms. V who does her job very well. She teaches us patiently and provides a lot of useful information to help us understand the subject better.

× For now I'm studying.

✓ I am currently studying.

句子结构不完整，缺少主语和谓语的完整表达。应使用完整句子表达当前正在进行的动作。

× Currently studying at law college and my school did not allow.

✓ I am currently studying at law college, and my school does not allow it.

句子缺少主语，且时态不一致。应补充主语并统一时态。

× People to bring their smartphone to use in the lesson, therefore.

✓ People are not allowed to bring their smartphones to use in the lesson; therefore, it is quite hard.

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语动词，且连接词使用不当。应补充谓语并调整连接词位置。

× People to bring their smartphone to use in the lesson, therefore.

✓ People are not allowed to bring their smartphones to use in the lesson; therefore, it is quite hard.

smartphone应使用复数形式smartphones，因为people指复数。

× my school did not allow.

✓ my school does not allow it.

描述现在的规则，应使用一般现在时，不能用过去时did not allow。

× When I was a secondary school student in high school, there are many.

✓ When I was a secondary school student in high school, there were many.

there指代复数名词，时态应与句子时间一致，使用过去时were。

× When I was a secondary school student in high school, there are many.

✓ When I was a secondary school student in high school, there were many.

描述过去的情况，应使用过去时态。

× Learn rules and even though that is more and more and the college.

✓ We learned many rules, and even though there were more and more rules in college,

句子结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，表达不完整。应补充主语和谓语，使句子完整。

× High school, they are many students try to use the rules.

✓ In high school, many students tried to follow the rules.

students为复数，谓语动词应与主语一致，且时态应为过去时tried。

× High school, they are many students try to use the rules.

✓ In high school, many students tried to follow the rules.

描述过去的情况，应使用过去时态。

× Which are called V and I think he did very well because she.

✓ His name is V, and I think he did very well because he

代词使用错误，he和she混用，应保持代词一致。

× Which are called V and I think he did very well because she.

✓ His name is V, and I think he did very well because he

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语和完整表达。应补充完整句子。

× Tosh the student a lot and give a lot of. Information from us even though.

✓ taught the students a lot and gave us a lot of information.

代词使用错误，且动词时态不一致，应使用过去时态并正确使用代词。

× Tosh the student a lot and give a lot of. Information from us even though.

✓ taught the students a lot and gave us a lot of information.

描述过去的动作，应使用过去时态。