规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể, rõ ràng hơn để làm câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

範例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, all students must wear a uniform every day. These rules help maintain discipline and create a sense of unity among students.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt ý tưởng mạch lạc hơn. Hãy dùng các từ nối để liên kết các ý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể, dễ hiểu để làm câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

範例: Yes, I think more rules can help students become more responsible. For example, when I was younger, I didn't like doing homework, but now I always finish it before playing games.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, làm cho ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, chính xác và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

範例: Yes, I have a teacher who does her job very well. My biology teacher is very responsible and always helps students understand the lessons clearly.

× At my school, there are several rules that students must follow. For example, all students have to wear a uniform and if someone doesn't complain they will find the ship linearly access.

✓ At my school, there are several rules that students must follow. For example, all students have to wear a uniform, and if someone doesn't comply, they will face disciplinary action.

The original sentence uses 'if someone doesn't complain' which is incorrect; it should be 'if someone doesn't comply' to indicate not following rules. Also, 'they will find the ship linearly access' is nonsensical and likely a mishearing or typo; it should be 'they will face disciplinary action' to convey consequences. The conjunction 'and' connects two related clauses, so a comma before 'and' is appropriate here.

× These crews have maintained discipline and create a sense of unity.

✓ These rules have maintained discipline and created a sense of unity.

The word 'crews' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'rules' to refer to the school regulations. Also, the verbs should be consistent in tense: 'have maintained' and 'created' (past participle) to match the present perfect tense. This corrects the subject-verb agreement and meaning.

× Yes, because more and more crowds will have students become people who have responsibility.

✓ Yes, because more and more students will become people who have responsibility.

The phrase 'more and more crowds' is incorrect; 'crowds' refers to groups of people gathered together, which is not appropriate here. The intended meaning is that increasing numbers of students will develop responsibility, so 'more and more students' is correct.

× For example, when I was younger I don't I didn't like do homework, but now I always complete my homework before playing games.

✓ For example, when I was younger, I didn't like doing homework, but now I always complete my homework before playing games.

The phrase 'I don't I didn't like do homework' is incorrect and redundant. The correct past tense negative form is 'I didn't like doing homework.' Also, 'doing' is the correct gerund form after 'like' to indicate the activity.

× Yes, auditors who I meet always does her chop weight find simple.

✓ Yes, the teachers I meet always do their job well and simply.

The original sentence is unclear and contains multiple errors: 'auditors' is likely incorrect; 'teachers' fits the context. 'Who I meet' is acceptable but 'the teachers I meet' is more natural. 'Does her chop weight find simple' is nonsensical; it should be 'do their job well and simply.' Pronouns must agree in number and gender with their antecedents.

× My teacher who teaches me biology, she always have responsibility with her students.

✓ My teacher who teaches me biology always has responsibility towards her students.

The subject 'My teacher' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have.' Also, the pronoun 'she' is unnecessary and causes redundancy. The preposition 'with' should be 'towards' to express responsibility directed at students.