规则— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Are there any rules for students at your school?
考生
Yes, there are several rules for students at my school. For example, we must focus in class or or not use our phones during the lesson. After class you have a 10 minute break to drink water or go to the toilet and prepare the lesson books.
考官
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
考生
It depends on different situations. For example, some students feel boring about more rules and some students will obey the rules that will correct their bad behaviour.
考官
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
考生
Yes, I have a teacher doing her job very well. He is my primary. She is my primary school teacher and teach us to brave and to confident to express myself.
評估
總分
Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，如“or or not use our phones”重复且不准确，且句子结构较为简单。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复，并使用更自然流畅的表达方式。
範例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, we must pay attention during lessons and are not allowed to use our phones. After class, we have a 10-minute break to drink water, use the restroom, or prepare our books for the next lesson.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答表达不够清晰，语法和用词有误，如“feel boring about more rules”应为“feel bored by more rules”。建议加强句子结构和词汇的准确使用，表达观点时更具体。
範例: I think it depends on the situation. Some students may feel bored if there are too many rules, but others might follow them because the rules help correct bad behavior.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
分數: 50.0建議: 回答中存在性别混淆和语法错误，如“He is my primary”不完整且错误，动词形式错误。建议注意人称和性别一致，使用完整句子，并正确使用形容词和副词。
範例: Yes, I have a teacher who does her job very well. She was my primary school teacher and taught us to be brave and confident when expressing ourselves.
文法
× we must focus in class or or not use our phones during the lesson
✓ we must focus in class and not use our phones during the lesson
这里使用了错误的连词“or or”，应改为“and”表示两个规则同时适用。建议使用正确的连词连接句子。
× After class you have a 10 minute break to drink water or go to the toilet and prepare the lesson books.
✓ After class, you have a 10-minute break to drink water, go to the toilet, and prepare the lesson books.
句中缺少逗号分隔并列动作，且“10 minute”应为复合形容词“10-minute”。建议注意复合形容词的写法和并列动作的标点。
× some students feel boring about more rules
✓ some students feel bored about more rules
“boring”是形容词，表示令人感到无聊的事物；“bored”表示感到无聊的人。此处应使用“bored”形容学生的感受。
× some students will obey the rules that will correct their bad behaviour.
✓ some students will obey the rules that can correct their bad behaviour.
“will”用于表示未来时，这里应使用“can”表示规则有能力纠正行为。建议区分情态动词的用法。
× Yes, I have a teacher doing her job very well. He is my primary.
✓ Yes, I have a teacher doing his job very well. He is my primary school teacher.
前句中“her”与后文“He”指代不一致，应统一为“his”。另外“primary”应完整表达为“primary school teacher”。建议注意代词的一致性和表达完整性。
× She is my primary school teacher and teach us to brave and to confident to express myself.
✓ She is my primary school teacher and teaches us to be brave and confident to express ourselves.
主语是“She”，动词应加-s变为“teaches”；“to brave”应为“to be brave”；“to confident”应为“confident”；“myself”应为“ourselves”与“us”保持一致。建议注意主谓一致、动词形式和代词一致性。
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