规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“principals usually requires”应为“principal usually requires”，且句子较长且缺乏连贯性。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达，并注意主谓一致。

範例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, the principal requires us not to dye our hair, to wear school uniforms, and to avoid cheating during tests or homework.

建議: 回答表达不够清晰，存在重复和语法错误，如“many people think many students think”重复且冗余。建议简化表达，明确观点，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: I think it depends. Although some students feel that rules limit their freedom, having certain rules can help students develop discipline and good habits.

建議: 回答中时态使用不当，且表达不自然，如“emulates us to write novels”不符合英语习惯。建议使用正确时态，改进表达方式，并提供具体细节。

範例: Our English teacher does her job very well. She is friendly and encourages us to write stories, complete homework, and take tests to improve our skills.

× UMM our principals usually requires us not to dye our hair and to wear school uniforms and do not copy answers or do some plagiarism things when we are having tests or having homework.

✓ UMM our principal usually requires us not to dye our hair, to wear school uniforms, and not to copy answers or commit plagiarism when we are having tests or homework.

主语是单数的“principal”，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“requires”。此外，列举多个动作时，动词形式应保持一致，使用不定式结构更清晰。

× UMM our principals usually requires us not to dye our hair and to wear school uniforms and do not copy answers or do some plagiarism things when we are having tests or having homework.

✓ UMM our principal usually requires us not to dye our hair, to wear school uniforms, and not to copy answers or commit plagiarism when we are having tests or homework.

“do some plagiarism things”表达不准确，应使用“commit plagiarism”表示“抄袭”。

× Many people think many students think rules are not quite fit to them.

✓ Many people think many students think rules do not quite fit them.

“rules are not quite fit to them”中“fit”用法不当，应使用“fit”作动词，且搭配“fit someone”，不加介词“to”。

× And it may be not freedom, but sometimes setting rules are good for students.

✓ And it may not be freedom, but sometimes setting rules is good for students.

“setting rules”作为主语是单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式“is”。

× Our English teacher did her job very well.

✓ Our English teacher does her job very well.

根据上下文，描述老师的常态行为，应使用一般现在时“does”，而非过去时“did”。

× She was a quite friendly person who emulates us to write novels and to write homework and giving us tests to practice.

✓ She is a quite friendly person who encourages us to write novels and do homework and gives us tests to practice.

“quite friendly”前应加副词“quite”，且“emulates”用法错误，应为“encourages”；“to write homework”不合适，应为“do homework”；“giving”应改为“gives”保持时态一致。