规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: In your answer, try to be more concise and clear. Use correct grammar, for example, say "it is compulsory to attend class" instead of "the compulsory to attend the class." Also, avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, there are several rules at my school, especially regarding attendance. It is compulsory to attend all classes, and teachers record our attendance before starting lessons to ensure no one misses out.

建議: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words like "however" or "on the other hand" to compare ideas. Also, avoid vague phrases and be specific about your opinion.

範例: From my point of view, having more rules helps students stay organized and avoid mistakes. However, without too many rules, students may have more freedom to express themselves and develop their talents.

建議: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar. Start with a topic sentence, then add specific details. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, explain how the teacher uses stories to engage students. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases.

範例: Yes, I had an English teacher in secondary school who did her job very well. She engaged us by speaking good English and telling interesting stories related to the language, which helped capture our attention during lessons.

× Yes, there are several rules in my school, especially about the attendance and also the compulsory to attend the class.

✓ Yes, there are several rules in my school, especially about attendance and the compulsory attendance in class.

The phrase 'the compulsory to attend the class' is incorrect because 'compulsory' is an adjective and needs a noun to modify. Using 'the compulsory attendance' correctly turns it into a noun phrase. Also, 'attendance' does not need 'the' before it in this context.

× So the teacher will need to record our attendance before we starting the class to make sure that we don't drop off from the lesson.

✓ So the teacher will need to record our attendance before we start the class to make sure that we don't drop off from the lesson.

The verb 'starting' is incorrectly used here; after 'before' we need the base form of the verb 'start' to indicate the action. 'Starting' is a present participle and does not fit grammatically in this sentence.

× Besides that.

✓ Besides that,

'Besides that' is a sentence fragment and does not form a complete sentence. It should be connected to the following sentence or completed to form a full sentence.

× So from my point of view, if rules the students are well organized and they won't make so many mistakes from due to the restriction of the rules and without the rules the student will have more opportunity to shine in their own way.

✓ So from my point of view, if there are rules, the students are well organized and they won't make so many mistakes due to the restrictions of the rules, but without rules, the students will have more opportunity to shine in their own way.

The original sentence has several structural issues: missing 'there are' after 'if', incorrect phrase 'from due to', and inconsistent plural forms. Adding 'there are' clarifies the conditional clause. 'Due to' should not be preceded by 'from'. Also, 'student' should be plural to match 'students' earlier.

× Yes, I had a teacher who does her job very well during my secondary school.

✓ Yes, I had a teacher who did her job very well during my secondary school.

The main clause is in the past tense ('I had'), so the relative clause should also be in the past tense ('did') to maintain tense consistency.

× She is my English teacher and she always brings us together in the class by using a good English and also telling us stories about the English to bring up our attention during her.

✓ She was my English teacher and she always brought us together in class by using good English and also telling us stories about English to capture our attention during her lessons.

'In the class' should be 'in class' for natural usage. 'A good English' is incorrect; 'good English' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. 'Stories about the English' should be 'stories about English' without 'the'. 'Bring up our attention' is incorrect; 'capture our attention' is the correct phrase. Also, 'during her' is incomplete; it should be 'during her lessons'. Additionally, tense consistency requires past tense 'was' and 'brought'.