规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: คำตอบของคุณมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์และการใช้คำที่ไม่ถูกต้อง เช่น "should be arrive before 75 AM" ควรใช้เวลาให้ถูกต้องและชัดเจน นอกจากนี้ คำตอบยาวเกินไปและขาดการเชื่อมโยงที่ดีระหว่างประโยค ควรตอบให้กระชับและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล

範例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must arrive before 7:45 AM. Also, using phones in the classroom is not allowed to avoid distractions.

建議: คำตอบของคุณมีความคิดที่ดีแต่การใช้ภาษาและโครงสร้างประโยคยังไม่ชัดเจน เช่น "how the rules and structure communicate and effort" ควรปรับปรุงให้ประโยคสมบูรณ์และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความชัดเจนและลื่นไหลมากขึ้น

範例: I don't think more rules always help. Sometimes, too many rules can make students feel stressed. It depends on how the rules are explained and enforced.

建議: คำตอบนี้มีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์และการใช้คำ เช่น "describe of an outstanding teacher look like" และ "taking down to students" ควรปรับปรุงโครงสร้างประโยคให้ถูกต้องและใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม รวมถึงเชื่อมประโยคให้ลื่นไหลและกระชับมากขึ้น

範例: Yes, I have a teacher who is excellent. She explains everything clearly and breaks down complex ideas into simple steps without making students feel uncomfortable.

× you should be arrive before 75 AM

✓ you should arrive before 7:15 AM

The modal verb 'should' is followed directly by the base form of the verb without 'be'. Also, '75 AM' is not a valid time format; it should be '7:15 AM'.

× you shouldn't be able to use your phone in the classroom

✓ you shouldn't use your phone in the classroom

The phrase 'shouldn't be able to' implies inability, but the intended meaning is prohibition, so 'shouldn't use' is correct here.

× More rules don't lead to better learning or behaviour.

✓ More rules don't lead to better learning or behaviour.

This sentence is grammatically correct and requires no correction.

× It really depends on how the rules and structure communicate and effort.

✓ It really depends on how the rules and structure communicate effort.

The original sentence is unclear and incomplete. The phrase 'communicate and effort' is incorrect; it should be 'communicate effort' or rephrased for clarity.

× Yes I have.

✓ Yes, I have.

A comma is needed after 'Yes' to separate the interjection from the rest of the sentence.

× I can definitely describe of an outstanding teacher look like they're kind of like the gold standard many students remember for life first.

✓ I can definitely describe what an outstanding teacher looks like; they're kind of like the gold standard many students remember for life.

The phrase 'describe of' is incorrect; it should be 'describe what'. Also, 'look like' should be 'looks like' to agree with singular 'teacher'. The sentence structure is improved by splitting into two clauses.

× They breakdown complex idea into understandable step without taking down to students.

✓ They break down complex ideas into understandable steps without talking down to students.

'Breakdown' is a noun; the verb form is 'break down'. 'Idea' and 'step' should be plural to match 'complex' and 'understandable'. 'Taking down' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'talking down'.