规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达不够清晰，语法和词汇使用有误，导致意思难以理解。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用具体例子说明。

範例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to use mobile phones during class because it can distract them from studying.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不完整，缺乏连贯性。建议使用完整句子，明确表达观点，并用连接词使回答更流畅。

範例: Yes, I think students would benefit from having more rules because rules help us stay disciplined. For instance, if there are clear guidelines, students will know what is expected of them and behave better.

建議: 回答中信息表达不够连贯，语法和词汇使用不准确。建议先明确回答，再用具体细节支持，并使用连接词。

範例: Yes, I have a teacher who does her job very well. For example, my sister is a teacher who always plans her lessons carefully and organizes everything. Because of this, her students often get good grades.

× Yes definitely there are many receiving our school like I think it's the most essential you don't allow to carry off because it's care influence your school of studying.

✓ Yes, definitely there are many rules at our school. I think the most essential is that you are not allowed to carry things off because it can affect your studying at school.

原句中“many receiving our school”表达不清，应该是“many rules at our school”，即“学校里有许多规则”。“you don't allow to carry off”应改为“you are not allowed to carry things off”，因为这里需要被动语态表达禁止行为。句子结构混乱，需调整使其更通顺。

× Yes, actually for students with benefits more from more risk 'cause this means you need to follow something and if you do something you must be restrict. So it's a good way to.

✓ Yes, actually students benefit more from more rules because this means you need to follow something, and if you do something wrong, you must be restricted. So it's a good way.

原句中“with benefits more from more risk”表达错误，应为“students benefit more from more rules”。“must be restrict”应为“must be restricted”，动词需用过去分词形式构成被动语态。句子中“risk”应为“rules”，语义错误。

× Yes, of course. You know my sister is a teacher I know for she did her job very well because she always makes a plan and organised all things she also had. She also gets good scores.

✓ Yes, of course. You know my sister is a teacher. I know that she does her job very well because she always makes a plan and organizes everything. She also gets good scores.

原句中“I know for she did her job”表达不正确，应为“I know that she does her job”。时态应保持一致，使用一般现在时“does”。“organised all things she also had”语序和表达混乱，应改为“organizes everything”。“gets good scores”表达正确。