规则— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Are there any rules for students at your school?
考生
I don't currently study at school, but there are a few rules. In my school. For example, we used to go in specific types of clothes. There, and we always should have one.
考官
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
考生
I'm not sure that it's always a good idea to add a big amount of rules, but sometimes there are they can be useful. For example. Then certain problems appears, it can create a new rule.
考官
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
考生
Yes, I actually had a teacher at school. She was my favorite teacher. She she teach teach us math and I enjoy doing math since then actually. She was very inspiring.
評估
總分
Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
分數: 50.0建議: Ваш адказ мае праблемы з граматыкай і сэнсам, а таксама злучэнне сказаў не зусім лагічнае. Рэкамендуецца выкарыстоўваць больш зразумелыя і звязныя сказы, пазбягаць паўтораў і забяспечваць поўныя думкі.
範例: I don't currently study at school, but when I did, there were some rules. For example, we had to wear specific types of clothes, like uniforms, every day.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
分數: 55.0建議: Ваш адказ мае праблемы з граматыкай і лагічнай сувяззю. Рэкамендуецца выкарыстоўваць злучальныя словы для паляпшэння сувязі паміж сказамі і ўдакладняць свае думкі.
範例: I'm not sure that adding many rules is always beneficial, but sometimes they can be useful. For example, when certain problems appear, creating a new rule can help solve them.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
分數: 60.0建議: Ваш адказ мае паўторы і граматычныя памылкі. Рэкамендуецца пазбягаць паўтораў, выкарыстоўваць правільныя формы дзеясловаў і дадаваць больш канкрэтных дэталяў.
範例: Yes, I had a teacher at school who was my favorite. She taught us math, and since then, I have enjoyed the subject a lot. She was very inspiring and made learning fun.
文法
× For example, we used to go in specific types of clothes.
✓ For example, we used to go wearing specific types of clothes.
The phrase 'go in specific types of clothes' is incorrect because the verb 'go' should be followed by a verb in the present participle form to indicate the action of wearing clothes. Using 'wearing' after 'go' correctly expresses the intended meaning.
× There, and we always should have one.
✓ There, and we should always have one.
The modal verb 'should' is incorrectly placed after 'always'. The correct word order is 'should always' to properly express obligation or recommendation.
× I'm not sure that it's always a good idea to add a big amount of rules, but sometimes there are they can be useful.
✓ I'm not sure that it's always a good idea to add a large number of rules, but sometimes they can be useful.
The phrase 'a big amount of rules' is incorrect because 'amount' is used with uncountable nouns. 'Rules' are countable, so 'a large number of rules' is the correct quantifier.
× Then certain problems appears, it can create a new rule.
✓ Then certain problems appear, it can create a new rule.
The subject 'problems' is plural, so the verb should be 'appear' instead of 'appears' to agree in number.
× She she teach teach us math and I enjoy doing math since then actually.
✓ She taught us math and I have enjoyed doing math since then actually.
The sentence has repeated words and incorrect verb tense. 'Teach' should be in past tense 'taught' because it refers to a past event. Also, 'enjoy' should be in present perfect 'have enjoyed' to indicate an action continuing from the past to present.
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