规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by correcting grammar errors and avoiding redundancy. For example, "schools" should be singular "school". Also, avoid repeating words like "really, really". Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, there are several rules at my school that students must follow to maintain discipline and credibility. These rules help us enhance our creativity and make us more responsible. Therefore, I believe rules are very important for students.

建議: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. For example, "student benefit" should be "students benefit". Also, avoid filler words like "uh UN create". Try to use linking words like "however" to show contrast and be more specific in your explanation.

範例: Yes, students do benefit from rules; however, having too many rules can be overwhelming and stressful. As a result, students may feel uncomfortable sharing their thoughts and feelings, which can negatively affect their creativity.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammar errors and awkward phrases. For example, "a impeccable job" should be "an impeccable job", and "implying rules on us" should be "enforcing rules on us". Use linking words like "also" properly and try to be more specific about what makes the teacher good.

範例: Many teachers do their job well, but if I had to choose one, it would be our class teacher. She does an impeccable job of maintaining a friendly environment and also enforces rules to help us become more responsible and obedient.

× Yes, there are many rules at my schools for students that we have to follow in order to maintain discipline and credibility in school.

✓ Yes, there are many rules at my school for students that we have to follow in order to maintain discipline and credibility in school.

The word 'schools' is plural but the context refers to a single school. Using the singular form 'school' is correct here to match the intended meaning.

× Yes, indeed student benefit from rules, but applying many rules can be very overwhelming and hectic for students.

✓ Yes, indeed students benefit from rules, but applying many rules can be very overwhelming and hectic for students.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with the plural verb 'benefit' and the general statement about students.

× They might feel out of the place and uncomfortable to share the thought and feeling about certain things.

✓ They might feel out of place and uncomfortable sharing their thoughts and feelings about certain things.

The phrase 'out of the place' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'out of place'. Also, 'the thought and feeling' should be plural and possessive pronouns 'their thoughts and feelings' are more appropriate. Additionally, 'uncomfortable to share' is better expressed as 'uncomfortable sharing'.

× This will create uh UN create a bad influence in their creativity.

✓ This will create a bad influence on their creativity.

The phrase 'uh UN create' is an error and should be removed. Also, the correct preposition is 'on' not 'in' when talking about influence affecting something.

× She does a impeccable job in maintaining friendly environment and also implying rules on us to make us more responsible and obedient.

✓ She does an impeccable job in maintaining a friendly environment and also applying rules to us to make us more responsible and obedient.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before the vowel sound in 'impeccable'. 'Friendly environment' needs the article 'a'. The verb 'implying' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'applying'. Also, 'implying rules on us' is incorrect; it should be 'applying rules to us'.