规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but to improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and add linking words to make your response more coherent. Also, avoid slight redundancy such as repeating 'rules' multiple times. For example, you can replace 'rules' with 'regulations' or 'policies' and use connectors like 'for instance' or 'therefore'.

範例: Yes, my school has several regulations that help maintain discipline and order. For instance, students must wear uniforms, which not only promote a professional appearance but also minimize distractions. Therefore, these policies foster a sense of unity and enable students to concentrate better on their studies.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect clarity. To improve, focus on structuring your sentences correctly and using linking words like 'however' and 'therefore' appropriately. Also, avoid repetition and ensure your ideas flow logically.

範例: It depends on the number of rules. If there are too many, students might find it hard to follow them and get distracted. However, having a reasonable number of beneficial rules can create a better learning environment. Therefore, it's important to maintain a balance.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical mistakes and awkward expressions. To improve, pay attention to verb forms and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to be more specific about how the teacher helped you.

範例: Yes, I have a teacher I have known since university who has supported me throughout my thesis. She is very focused and strict, which has helped me stay organized and concentrate on my work. Thanks to her guidance, I have been able to write my articles more effectively.

× students are required to wear uniform

✓ students are required to wear uniforms

The word 'uniform' should be plural 'uniforms' because it refers to the clothing worn by multiple students. In English, when referring to items worn by many individuals, the plural form is used.

× More for more rules.

✓ More rules.

The phrase 'More for more rules' is ungrammatical and unclear. The correct phrase is simply 'More rules' to answer the question about having additional rules.

× if there are a reasonable amount of rules that are beneficial

✓ if there is a reasonable number of rules that are beneficial

The word 'amount' is used with uncountable nouns, but 'rules' are countable. Therefore, 'number' should be used instead of 'amount'.

× So we should take have a balance.

✓ So we should have a balance.

The phrase 'take have' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'have a balance' to convey the intended meaning.

× I have a teacher who I have known since university.

✓ I have a teacher whom I have known since university.

The relative pronoun 'who' should be 'whom' when it functions as the object of the verb 'have known'.

× has been helping me writing my articles

✓ has been helping me write my articles

After the verb 'helping', the base form of the verb 'write' should be used, not the '-ing' form 'writing'.

× That her strict rules has have helped me stay focused and organized during my studies.

✓ Her strict rules have helped me stay focused and organized during my studies.

The sentence is ungrammatical with 'That' at the beginning and 'has have' together. It should be simplified to 'Her strict rules have helped me...' to be correct.