规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Apni uttor e beshi fluent hote paren ebong filler words (uh, umm) komate paren. Uttor ta aro spostho korte, subject-verb agreement thik rakhun ebong sentence gulo ke logically link korun. Apnar uttor 5 sentence er moddhe rakhun ebong proshner uttor direct din.

範例: Yes, there are several rules for students at my school. For example, punctuality is very important; all students must arrive on time. Additionally, there is a strict dress code that everyone must follow. Moreover, specific times are set for lunch and play to keep the day organized.

建議: Apni uttor e filler words komate hobe ebong sentence gulo ke aro shongjoto korte hobe. Linking words use kore uttor ke logical rakhun. Specific example diye uttor ke bistarito korun ebong proshner uttor direct din.

範例: Yes, I believe students benefit from school rules. For instance, following punctuality helps them develop discipline useful in their future jobs. Also, completing homework on time teaches responsibility, which is important in professional life.

建議: Apnar uttor e grammar shothik korte hobe, jemon subject-verb agreement. Filler words komate hobe ebong uttor ke shongjoto korte linking words babohar korun. Uttor ke spostho ebong specific example diye bistarito korun. Sentence gulo 5 er moddhe rakhun.

範例: Yes, I have many teachers who do their jobs very well. For example, my English teacher is very efficient and taught us important rules that have helped me throughout my life. Similarly, my Bangla teacher is also very dedicated and supportive.

× One of them are uh punctuality.

✓ One of them is punctuality.

The phrase 'One of them' refers to a singular item, so the verb should be singular 'is' instead of plural 'are'. This is a common singular and plural agreement issue.

× all of the students must reach UH in uh to the school in time.

✓ all of the students must reach the school on time.

The phrase 'reach UH in uh to the school in time' is incorrect. The correct preposition to indicate punctuality is 'on time'. Also, 'reach the school' is sufficient; 'in' and 'to' are unnecessary here.

× Also, there were rules for dress code and uh specific time was allotted for lunch or play.

✓ Also, there are rules for dress code and a specific time is allotted for lunch or play.

The question is about current rules, so present tense 'are' and 'is allotted' should be used instead of past tense 'were' and 'was allotted'.

× Definitely students can benefit from, uh, the rules of the school.

✓ Definitely, students can benefit from the rules of the school.

The sentence is mostly correct, but a comma after 'Definitely' improves clarity. No major preposition error here, so this is a minor punctuation suggestion.

× if, uh, they strictly follow the punctuality rules of the school, they can use it in their professional life, uh, when they join, uh, in any job.

✓ if they strictly follow the punctuality rules of the school, they can use them in their professional life when they join any job.

The pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to refer to 'rules' (plural). Also, 'join any job' does not require 'in' before 'any job'.

× Also there are other rules like like uh, uh, responding to the homework that also helps them in their professional life.

✓ Also, there are other rules like responding to homework that also help them in their professional life.

'Responding to homework' is plural in meaning, so the verb should be 'help' instead of 'helps'. Also, 'the homework' is better as 'homework' without 'the'.

× Yes, I have many teachers who does their job very well, such as my English teacher was very much efficient in, uh, teaching English.

✓ Yes, I have many teachers who do their job very well, such as my English teacher who is very efficient in teaching English.

The relative pronoun 'who' refers to 'teachers' (plural), so the verb should be 'do' not 'does'. Also, 'was very much efficient' is awkward; present tense 'is very efficient' fits better.

× The rules, uh, he taught us, uh, was uh, very much useful throughout my life.

✓ The rules he taught us were very useful throughout my life.

'Rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'were' not 'was'. Also, 'very much useful' is awkward; 'very useful' is correct.