规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'Suggest' nên là 'They suggest' hoặc 'The rules include'. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.

範例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students are required to wear the school uniform, arrive to class on time, and not use mobile phones during lessons. These rules help maintain discipline and create a better learning environment for everyone.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý phát âm và chính tả, ví dụ 'roots' nên là 'rules'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn và tránh những câu không liên quan như 'Enjoy your school life'. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ có liên kết logic.

範例: Not really. I believe having too many rules can make students feel restricted and less motivated. It is better to have some basic rules to maintain order while also giving students the freedom to be creative.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng từ vựng chính xác, ví dụ 'dares her job' nên là 'does her job'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời cần mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'wrap the speaking'. Hãy dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và có cấu trúc rõ ràng.

範例: Yes, I have an English teacher who does her job very well. She explains difficult concepts clearly and always encourages us to practice speaking through fun activities. For example, she often organizes group discussions, which help me feel more confident and motivated to use English in real situations.

× Suggest wearing the school uniform, arriving to class on time and not using mobile phone during lesson.

✓ They suggest wearing the school uniform, arriving at class on time, and not using mobile phones during lessons.

The original sentence lacks a subject and uses incorrect prepositions. 'Suggest' needs a subject, and 'arriving to class' should be 'arriving at class'. Also, 'mobile phone' should be plural 'mobile phones' to match the context, and 'during lesson' should be 'during lessons'.

× Suggest wearing the school uniform, arriving to class on time and not using mobile phone during lesson.

✓ They suggest wearing the school uniform, arriving at class on time, and not using mobile phones during lessons.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect after 'arriving'; it should be 'at'. Also, 'during lesson' should be 'during lessons' to indicate the general time period.

× Suggest wearing the school uniform, arriving to class on time and not using mobile phone during lesson.

✓ They suggest wearing the school uniform, arriving at class on time, and not using mobile phones during lessons.

'Mobile phone' should be plural 'mobile phones' because it refers to phones in general, and 'lesson' should be plural 'lessons' to indicate multiple class periods.

× I think this will resonate well because they have maintained the supply and create a better learning environment for everyone.

✓ I think this will resonate well because they have maintained the supply and created a better learning environment for everyone.

The verbs 'have maintained' and 'create' are inconsistent in tense. After 'have maintained' (present perfect), the verb should be 'created' (past participle) to maintain parallel structure.

× Not really, I believe having too many roots may make students feel restricted and less motivated.

✓ Not really, I believe having too many rules may make students feel restricted and less motivated.

The word 'roots' is incorrect; it should be 'rules' to match the context of school regulations.

× It's better to have them some basis for taught to maintain order while also giving students the freedom to be creative.

✓ It's better to have some basic rules taught to maintain order while also giving students the freedom to be creative.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Have them some basis for taught' is incorrect; it should be 'have some basic rules taught' to convey the intended meaning.

× Yes, I have an English teacher who dares her job very well.

✓ Yes, I have an English teacher who does her job very well.

The verb 'dares' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'does' to indicate performing the job well.

× She explained difficult concepts very clearly and always encouraged us to wrap the speaking through fun activities.

✓ She explained difficult concepts very clearly and always encouraged us to practice speaking through fun activities.

The phrase 'wrap the speaking' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'practice speaking'. Also, 'through fun activities' is appropriate to indicate the method.

× For example, she often organized work discussion, which helped me feel more confident and motivated to use English in real.

✓ For example, she often organized work discussions, which helped me feel more confident and motivated to use English in real life.

'Work discussion' should be plural 'work discussions' to indicate multiple sessions. Also, 'in real' is incomplete; it should be 'in real life' to make sense.