规则— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise. For example, directly state that there are many rules, and explain why briefly, using correct grammar and linking words.

範例: Yes, there are many rules at my school because it is important to maintain discipline. For example, students are not allowed to play games during class time to ensure they focus on their studies.

建議: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and is somewhat unclear. Use correct verb forms and explain your opinion clearly with reasons. Use linking words to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules because rules help guide behavior and improve learning. For instance, clear rules can encourage students to be more responsible.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains some awkward phrasing and minor errors. Use natural expressions and avoid redundancy. Also, add a reason or example to support your answer.

範例: Yes, I have a teacher named Bhuvan Mandu Adikari who teaches English. He does his job very well because he explains lessons clearly and helps students when they have difficulties.

× Yes, there are lots of rules for student at my school because school is a place where students are able to read and playing game at the same time and there are certain rules for a student with are made by teachers.

✓ Yes, there are lots of rules for students at my school because school is a place where students are able to read and play games at the same time and there are certain rules for students which are made by teachers.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' to match 'lots of rules for students'. 'Playing game' should be 'play games' to use the base verb form after 'able to' and pluralize 'game' to 'games' to match the context. 'A student with are made' is incorrect; it should be 'students which are made' to agree in number and use the correct relative pronoun.

× Yes, I think student will benefited more for more because when we created some rules it is made for his or her betterment.

✓ Yes, I think students will benefit more from more rules because when we create some rules they are made for their betterment.

'Student' should be plural 'students' to match the context. 'Will benefited' is incorrect; the modal verb 'will' should be followed by the base form 'benefit'. 'For more' is unclear and should be 'from more rules' to specify the benefit. 'Created' should be present tense 'create' to match the general truth. 'It is made' should be plural 'they are made' to agree with 'rules'. 'His or her' can be replaced with 'their' for simplicity and correctness.

× Yes, I have a teacher who does his work jobs very well. His name is Bhuvan Mandu Adikari and he teaches us English subject.

✓ Yes, I have a teacher who does his work very well. His name is Bhuvan Mandu Adikari and he teaches us the English subject.

'Work jobs' is redundant; 'work' alone is sufficient. 'English subject' should be 'the English subject' to use the definite article correctly before a specific subject.