鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Clarify your main point with a direct topic sentence and correct grammar. State whether you like buying shoes, how often you buy them, and a reason. Use linking words (e.g., because, so) and avoid unclear phrases. Keep it to 2–4 concise sentences.

範例: I don't buy shoes very often. I usually buy a new pair every three months because shoes are expensive, so I try to save money by wearing them longer.

建議: Answer directly with correct tense and give one or two clear reasons. Use linking words like because or however. Mention if you might try online shopping in the future. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

範例: No, I have never bought shoes online because I prefer to try them on to check the fit and appearance. However, I might buy online in the future if there is a good return policy.

建議: Give a clear price range, then explain why that range suits you using correct vocabulary and grammar. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and be specific about what the money buys (quality, comfort, durability). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I usually spend about $100 to $115 on a pair of shoes because that price gives me good quality and comfort. For example, shoes in this range tend to last longer and fit better.

建議: Start with a clear preference statement, then give a concrete reason. Use linking words like because or although. Avoid unclear or irrelevant phrases. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because I walk a lot and need good support. Although stylish shoes look nice, comfort is more important for my daily activities.

× I don't like Ben shoes very often.

✓ I don't buy many shoes very often.

The student used 'Ben' incorrectly as a modifier; likely intended to say they do not buy shoes often. Also 'I don't like Ben shoes' mixes meaning. Replace with 'I don't buy many shoes very often' to express frequency. Use correct pronoun/word choice and plural noun form for countable items.

× I usually buy shoes three months a time.

✓ I usually buy shoes every three months.

The phrase 'three months a time' is incorrect English. Use the present simple for habitual actions and the correct time expression 'every three months.' This fixes tense and idiomatic time expression.

× I think it's now that it's expensive and I can save money.

✓ I think now that shoes are expensive, so I can save money.

Sentence had unclear structure and incorrect use of 'it's now that'. Use 'I think now that' + clause and change 'it' to 'shoes' (plural). Add 'so' to show result. This corrects sentence structure and reference.

× No, I had not ever bought shoes on long.

✓ No, I have never bought shoes online.

The student used past perfect 'had not ever bought' incorrectly and misspelled 'online' as 'on long.' Use present perfect 'have never bought' to talk about life experience up to now, and correct 'online.'

× I think they should buy shoes on the night to fill the shoes and see the real face on it.

✓ I think people should buy shoes at night to try them on and see how they really look.

Several errors: wrong pronoun 'they' and vague 'the night' should be 'at night' or 'in the store.' 'Fill the shoes' is wrong; use 'try them on.' 'See the real face on it' is incorrect idiom; use 'see how they really look.' This fixes pronouns, prepositions, and word choice.

× I usually spend on shoes $100 to $115.00.

✓ I usually spend between $100 and $115 on shoes.

The word order and preposition are incorrect. Use 'spend between X and Y on shoes' to express a range and correct placement of amount and 'on.'

× I think this price is the best. It's not that in expensive and not that cheap and it can avoid.

✓ I think this price is the best. It's not too expensive and not too cheap, so it is reasonable.

Errors: 'not that in expensive' should be 'not too expensive'; 'and it can avoid' is unclear. Replace with 'so it is reasonable' to convey intended meaning. Correct adverb usage and sentence clarity.

× I've heard comfortable shoes first.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes.

'I've heard comfortable shoes first' is ungrammatical and misuses 'heard.' Use 'I prefer' to state a preference. This corrects verb choice and tense.

× No one will see our shoes and we suffers careful our foods.

✓ No one will notice our shoes and we can take care of our feet.

Original sentence has multiple issues: 'we suffers' is incorrect subject-verb agreement and wrong verb; 'careful our foods' is meaningless. Likely intended 'take care of our feet.' Use correct verb form 'can take' and correct noun 'feet.' This fixes subject-verb agreement and word choice.