图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your response more concise and correct the grammar, for example, avoid saying "I'm I will be". Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: No, I don't often go to the library because I find my home more comfortable for studying, and I get distracted by other people there.

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and has grammatical mistakes. Try to avoid repeating phrases like "as I said before" and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about how the library helps you.

範例: Although I rarely go to the library, when I do, I study English for my IELTS exam because the library provides useful books that help me improve.

建議: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases like "my. Numeration of the lessons". Try to clarify your ideas and use correct grammar. Also, provide more specific details about how studying in the library helped you.

範例: Yes, when I was a kid, my mother encouraged me to go to the library to study more, which helped me improve my school grades significantly.

建議: Your answer is vague and speculative. Try to avoid guessing and instead give a more general or honest response. Also, correct grammar mistakes like "a huge libraries" and use linking words for coherence.

範例: I'm not sure about Chinese kids specifically, but given China's large population, I imagine many children visit libraries regularly to study and read.

× Well, actually no, because I think home is a more comfortable place to study and I'm I will be so distracted by people who study in a library.

✓ Well, actually no, because I think home is a more comfortable place to study and I will be so distracted by people who study in a library.

The phrase 'I'm I will be' contains an unnecessary repetition of the subject and modal verb. The correct form is 'I will be'. Remove the extra 'I'm' to fix the modal verb usage.

× Well as I said before I do not usually go to library for study but when I go there I want to study English for my IELTS exam and this helps me to use the books of there.

✓ Well as I said before I do not usually go to the library for study but when I go there I want to study English for my IELTS exam and this helps me to use the books there.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'books of there' is incorrect; it should be 'books there' to indicate location properly.

× Well, frankly speaking, yes, my mother forced me a lot to go to library to study more and more and it was helpful for me and my. Numeration of the lessons in the school has been improved when I study in library.

✓ Well, frankly speaking, yes, my mother forced me a lot to go to the library to study more and more and it was helpful for me. My understanding of the lessons in school improved when I studied in the library.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'Numeration of the lessons' is incorrect; 'My understanding of the lessons' is more appropriate. Additionally, tense consistency is important: 'has been improved' should be 'improved' to match past context.

× Well, actually I do not know so much about Chinese kids, but because of the huge amount of population of China, I think they have a huge libraries and they go there a lot.

✓ Well, actually I do not know so much about Chinese kids, but because of the huge population of China, I think they have huge libraries and they go there a lot.

The phrase 'a huge libraries' is incorrect because 'libraries' is plural and cannot be preceded by the singular article 'a'. Also, 'huge amount of population' should be 'huge population' because 'population' is a countable noun here.