图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and combining ideas smoothly. Try to use linking words to connect your points and keep your answer within 4-5 sentences.

範例: Yes, I often go to the library because it's a quiet place that helps me concentrate on my studies. Moreover, I appreciate the cool air conditioning and free Wi-Fi, which make it very convenient for me to work there.

建議: Your answer contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, focus on correct verb forms and clearer sentence structure. Also, use linking words to organise your ideas logically and provide specific examples.

範例: In the library, I usually prepare for my final exams and work on my dissertation. I also enjoy reading novels there because the library offers a wide range of materials that support my studies and interests.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete at the end. To improve, make sure your sentences are complete and coherent. Use linking words to connect ideas and explain how the experience influenced you specifically.

範例: When I was a child, I often visited the local community library to borrow books with colourful pictures. This experience helped me develop a strong reading habit, which has benefited me throughout my life.

建議: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. To improve, focus on correct sentence structure and vocabulary. Also, explain your ideas more clearly and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Yes, I believe Chinese children often go to libraries. Parents usually encourage their children to visit libraries or bookstores to develop good reading habits, which is important for their cognitive development.

× Well, I do a wide range of activities in the library such as preparing for my final exams, read some books I like, especially the novels, and also do some prepare for my dissertation writing.

✓ Well, I do a wide range of activities in the library such as preparing for my final exams, reading some books I like, especially novels, and also preparing for my dissertation writing.

The verbs following 'such as' should be in the '-ing' form to maintain parallel structure. 'Read' and 'do some prepare' are incorrect; they should be 'reading' and 'preparing' respectively to match 'preparing' earlier in the sentence.

× I think libraries provide all kinds of materials for me to attend to.

✓ I think libraries provide all kinds of materials for me to use.

The phrase 'attend to' is incorrect here because it means to deal with or take care of something, which does not fit the context. The correct verb is 'use' to indicate utilizing materials.

× And I think it is this kind of experience helps me to develop a habit of reading so that I I can you.

✓ And I think it is this kind of experience that helped me to develop a habit of reading so that I can continue.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. Since the experience happened in the past, 'helped' (past tense) is appropriate. Also, the original sentence is incomplete and unclear; 'that' is needed to introduce the relative clause, and 'can continue' completes the thought logically.

× Chinese students are always encouraged by their children to the local library or the bookstores in order to develop their habit of reading.

✓ Chinese children are always encouraged by their parents to go to the local library or bookstores in order to develop their habit of reading.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'students' and 'their children' which is confusing. It should be 'children' who are encouraged by 'their parents'. Also, 'to the local library' needs the verb 'go' to be grammatically correct.

× And I think it's quite efficient for people, the children's development of cognitive.

✓ And I think it's quite effective for children's cognitive development.

The word 'efficient' is incorrectly used; 'effective' is the correct adjective here. Also, the phrase 'people, the children's development of cognitive' is awkward and incorrect. It should be 'children's cognitive development' for clarity and correctness.