图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有些重复，比如“prefer studying at home rather than go to library because I like staying at home”表达不够简洁。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，同时注意冠词使用，如“in library”应为“in the library”。

範例: No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer studying at home where I feel more relaxed. For example, I find it hard to concentrate in the library due to the many people there.

建議: 回答内容不清晰，表达混乱，且语法错误较多。建议明确回答问题，使用简单清晰的句子，并注意时态和单复数。

範例: I usually try to find a book I like in the library, but I often can't because I don't enjoy reading or studying there. Also, I feel uncomfortable because people might distract me.

建議: 句子结构不完整，表达不流畅。建议使用完整句子，注意时态一致，并清楚表达原因。

範例: No, I didn't go to the library much as a kid because I preferred playing with my friends. Studying in a closed place made me feel uncomfortable.

建議: 回答中有语法错误，如“makes them don't have”应改为“means they don't have”。建议使用连贯的句子，并注意时态和冠词的正确使用。

範例: No, Chinese kids often don't go to the library because they have many after-school classes like Chinese, maths, and English. However, I used to go to the library sometimes when I was young.

× I prefer studying at home rather than go to library because I like staying at home.

✓ I prefer studying at home rather than going to the library because I like staying at home.

在比较结构中，'rather than'后面应使用动词的-ing形式，表示两个动作的对比。此外，'library'前应加定冠词'the'。

× I prefer studying at home rather than go to library because I like staying at home.

✓ I prefer studying at home rather than going to the library because I like staying at home.

'library'作为特指的场所，前面应加定冠词'the'。

× I can't pay attention to studying in library because there are a lot of people in library.

✓ I can't pay attention to studying in the library because there are a lot of people in the library.

'library'前应加定冠词'the'，表示特定的图书馆。

× I usually try to find a bug I like but usually I can't because I don't like reading and studying so I felt really uncomfortable and people will concentrate me.

✓ I usually try to find a book I like but usually I can't because I don't like reading and studying, so I feel really uncomfortable and people will distract me.

'bug'应为'book'，且句中缺少逗号分隔两个分句。'concentrate me'用法错误，应为'distract me'。

× I usually try to find a bug I like but usually I can't because I don't like reading and studying so I felt really uncomfortable and people will concentrate me.

✓ I usually try to find a book I like but usually I can't because I don't like reading and studying, so I feel really uncomfortable and people will distract me.

前半句为一般现在时，后半句不应使用过去时'felt'，应保持时态一致。

× No, because when I was a kid I really like playing with my friends so that little I studied so little so it makes me feel really uncomfortable to studying in a closed place like.

✓ No, because when I was a kid I really liked playing with my friends, so I studied very little, and it made me feel really uncomfortable studying in a closed place like that.

'like'后应加指示代词'that'，'studied'应为过去式，'makes'应为过去式'made'，'to studying'应改为'studying'。

× No, because when I was a kid I really like playing with my friends so that little I studied so little so it makes me feel really uncomfortable to studying in a closed place like.

✓ No, because when I was a kid I really liked playing with my friends, so I studied very little, and it made me feel really uncomfortable studying in a closed place like that.

描述过去的事情时，动词应使用过去时态。

× No because they have a lot of after school classes like Chinese, maths, English so that makes them don't have a lot of time to do it.

✓ No, because they have a lot of after-school classes like Chinese, maths, and English, so that means they don't have a lot of time to do it.

'after school classes'应加连字符变为'after-school classes'，并且列举时应加连词'and'。

× No because they have a lot of after school classes like Chinese, maths, English so that makes them don't have a lot of time to do it.

✓ No, because they have a lot of after-school classes like Chinese, maths, and English, so that means they don't have a lot of time to do it.

'makes them don't have'结构不正确，应改为'so that means they don't have'，使用正确的表达方式。

× But when I was young I I do go to library sometimes.

✓ But when I was young, I did go to the library sometimes.

描述过去的事情时，'do go'应改为过去式'did go'，'library'前应加定冠词'the'。