图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は自然ですが、少し冗長で文法的な誤りもあります。例えば、「subscribe an app」ではなく「subscribe to an app」が正しいです。また、内容を簡潔にし、5文以内にまとめることを意識しましょう。

範例: I don't often go to the library because many books are available online. I also subscribe to an app that lets me read books on my smartphone, which is very convenient.

建議: 繰り返しや言い間違いが多いので、流暢さを向上させる必要があります。また、接続詞を使って文をつなげるとより自然になります。

範例: I usually don't read books in the library. Instead, I do my homework there because it is very quiet, which helps me concentrate better.

建議: 「uh」などのフィラーを減らし、文法的に正しい表現を使いましょう。また、理由を述べる際は接続詞を使って論理的に繋げると良いです。

範例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid for two reasons. First, my school had a library, so I didn't need to go elsewhere. Second, I preferred playing outside rather than reading books.

建議: 推測を述べる際は、より簡潔で自然な表現を使いましょう。また、同じ語句の繰り返しを避け、語彙の幅を広げることが大切です。

範例: I'm not sure, but I think Chinese children often visit libraries because they are generally very eager to study and learn new things.

× I also actually subscribe an app which can read a lot of books using my smartphone.

✓ I also actually subscribe to an app which can read a lot of books using my smartphone.

The verb 'subscribe' requires the preposition 'to' when indicating what is being subscribed to. Omitting 'to' is a common preposition error.

× I usually don't read books in in library.

✓ I usually don't read books in the library.

The phrase 'in library' is missing the definite article 'the'. Also, the repeated 'in' is a typographical error. The correct phrase is 'in the library'.

× One, the library is available in my school, so I didn't, I didn't need to go to library.

✓ One, the library is available in my school, so I didn't need to go to the library.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific library. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect.

× Second, I didn't uh, like to read book when I was a kid.

✓ Second, I didn't uh, like to read books when I was a kid.

The noun 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to reading in general, which is countable and plural in this context.

× So I believe Chinese people like to go to library.

✓ So I believe Chinese people like to go to the library.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific or general known place. Omitting 'the' is incorrect.