图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有點冗長且語法不太正確，建議你用更簡潔且正確的句子來表達。例如，先直接回答問題，再用一兩句話說明原因，避免語法錯誤和重複。

範例: Yes, I often went to the library when I was in senior high school because it was easier to concentrate there than at home, where there were many distractions.

建議: 你的回答有點混亂且不夠清楚，建議你用更有條理的句子，並使用連接詞來組織內容，讓回答更流暢且具體。

範例: Usually, I borrow many books to read. Sometimes, I watch digital videos or search for information on the Internet. I also borrow videos to watch at home.

建議: 你的回答有些語法錯誤，且句子結構可以更自然。建議你用過去式描述過去的經驗，並用連接詞使句子更流暢。

範例: Yes, I went to the library very often because my parents wanted me to study. However, I didn't like going there much because I am not a bookworm. Still, I could concentrate better in the library.

建議: 你的回答有語法錯誤且表達不夠清楚，建議你用更簡潔且正確的句子，並用連接詞使句子更連貫。

範例: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because parents believe it is a good place to learn. However, not all children enjoy it or think the same way.

× Yes, I often go to the library when I was studying in the Senior High School because I need myself to focus on everything and I cannot concentrate it when I am doing my homework at home because there are so much things that can make me feel I am not.

✓ Yes, I often went to the library when I was studying in Senior High School because I needed myself to focus on everything and I could not concentrate when I was doing my homework at home because there were so many things that could distract me.

The sentence mixes present tense ('go', 'need', 'cannot') with past time reference ('when I was studying'). To maintain consistency, past tense verbs should be used to match the past time frame. Also, 'so much things' is incorrect; 'things' is plural, so 'so many things' is correct. 'Concentrate it' is incorrect; 'concentrate' is intransitive here and does not take an object.

× Yes, I often go to the library when I was studying in the Senior High School because I need myself to focus on everything and I cannot concentrate it when I am doing my homework at home because there are so much things that can make me feel I am not.

✓ Yes, I often went to the library when I was studying in Senior High School because I needed to focus on everything and I could not concentrate when I was doing my homework at home because there were so many things that could distract me.

The phrase 'I need myself to focus' is incorrect; 'myself' is a reflexive pronoun and is unnecessary here. The correct form is 'I needed to focus'. Also, 'concentrate it' is incorrect because 'concentrate' does not take a direct object in this context.

× Yes, I often go to the library when I was studying in the Senior High School because I need myself to focus on everything and I cannot concentrate it when I am doing my homework at home because there are so much things that can make me feel I am not.

✓ Yes, I often went to the library when I was studying in Senior High School because I needed to focus on everything and I could not concentrate when I was doing my homework at home because there were so many things that could distract me.

'So much things' is incorrect because 'things' is plural; the correct quantifier is 'so many things'.

× I often borrow lots of books to read and sometimes I will watch the digital videos like I can search everything I want on the Internet and also I will borrow some video that I can bring it to my house to read.

✓ I often borrowed lots of books to read and sometimes I watched digital videos because I could search for everything I wanted on the Internet. Also, I would borrow some videos that I could bring to my house to watch.

The sentence mixes present tense ('borrow', 'will watch') with past time context implied by the rest of the transcript. To maintain tense consistency, past tense verbs should be used. Also, 'some video' should be plural 'some videos' and 'bring it to my house to read' is incorrect because videos are watched, not read, and 'bring it' is unnecessary when 'some videos' is plural.

× I often borrow lots of books to read and sometimes I will watch the digital videos like I can search everything I want on the Internet and also I will borrow some video that I can bring it to my house to read.

✓ I often borrowed lots of books to read and sometimes I watched digital videos because I could search for everything I wanted on the Internet. Also, I would borrow some videos that I could bring to my house to watch.

The phrase 'search everything I want on the Internet' is missing the preposition 'for' after 'search'. Also, 'bring it to my house to read' is incorrect because videos are watched, not read, and 'bring it' is unnecessary when referring to plural 'videos'.

× Yes, I go to a library very often because my parents want me to study. But actually I don't like to go to the library because I'm not a bookworm. I don't like to read very much, but I can concentrate on library, that is true.

✓ Yes, I went to the library very often because my parents wanted me to study. But actually, I didn't like to go to the library because I'm not a bookworm. I don't like to read very much, but I could concentrate in the library, that is true.

The sentence mixes present tense ('go', 'want') with past time context ('when you were a kid'). To maintain consistency, past tense verbs should be used. Also, 'concentrate on library' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in the library'.

× Yes, I go to a library very often because my parents want me to study. But actually I don't like to go to the library because I'm not a bookworm. I don't like to read very much, but I can concentrate on library, that is true.

✓ Yes, I went to the library very often because my parents wanted me to study. But actually, I didn't like to go to the library because I'm not a bookworm. I don't like to read very much, but I could concentrate in the library, that is true.

'Concentrate on library' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'concentrate in the library'.

× Yes, we also go to the library because all of the Chinese parents think library is better place for children to learn, but they don't know what we really thinking and I think not everyone is very sure.

✓ Yes, we also go to the library because all Chinese parents think the library is a better place for children to learn, but they don't know what we are really thinking and I think not everyone is very sure.

The phrase 'what we really thinking' is missing the auxiliary verb 'are' to form the present continuous tense 'are thinking'. Also, 'library is better place' is missing the article 'the' before 'library' and 'a' before 'better place'.

× Yes, we also go to the library because all of the Chinese parents think library is better place for children to learn, but they don't know what we really thinking and I think not everyone is very sure.

✓ Yes, we also go to the library because all Chinese parents think the library is a better place for children to learn, but they don't know what we are really thinking and I think not everyone is very sure.

The sentence is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library' and the indefinite article 'a' before 'better place'.