图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'Instead of we will go'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy và tránh lặp từ.

範例: No, I don't often go to the library because libraries are not very common in Vietnam. Instead, I usually visit bookstores where I can find a wide variety of books and magazines for both studying and work.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'for my education to my study'. Hãy dùng liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về hoạt động của bạn trong thư viện.

範例: In the library, I usually read books and magazines to find useful materials for my studies. Additionally, I like to read comic books during my free time to relax after school.

建議: Câu trả lời cần tránh lặp từ như 'play with play with' và sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng cách. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó giải thích sự thay đổi thói quen một cách rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

範例: When I was a child, I preferred playing with toys rather than reading books. However, as I grew older, I needed to study more, so I started reading books to find useful information for my studies.

建議: Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'As a Vietnamese children' và trả lời câu hỏi một cách trực tiếp hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cung cấp lý do cụ thể hơn cho ý kiến của bạn.

範例: As a Vietnamese student, I am not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library. However, I know that they study very hard, so they probably use libraries to find useful information and study materials.

× Instead of we will go to the bookstores so we can find a variety of books and magazines for studying and works.

✓ Instead, we go to the bookstores so we can find a variety of books and magazines for studying and work.

The phrase 'Instead of we will go' is incorrect because 'instead of' should be followed by a noun or gerund, not a clause. The correct conjunction here is 'Instead,' to indicate an alternative action. Also, 'works' should be 'work' as an uncountable noun in this context.

× I usually read books and magazines to find a book with a useful material for my education to my study.

✓ I usually read books and magazines to find a book with useful material for my education and study.

The phrase 'a useful material' is incorrect because 'material' is an uncountable noun and should not have 'a'. Also, 'for my education to my study' is awkward; 'for my education and study' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Also, I want to find a comic book so I can read it in my free time for relaxing after school.

✓ Also, I want to find a comic book so I can read it in my free time to relax after school.

The phrase 'for relaxing' is incorrect here; the correct infinitive form 'to relax' should be used to express purpose.

× But when I grew up, I need to study more, so I always read books for useful information for my study.

✓ But when I grew up, I needed to study more, so I always read books for useful information for my study.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Grew up' is past tense, so 'need' should be changed to past tense 'needed' to maintain tense consistency.

× As a Vietnamese children, I don't know if the Chinese kids often go to the library, but I can see that they always need to study very hard.

✓ As a Vietnamese child, I don't know if the Chinese kids often go to the library, but I can see that they always need to study very hard.

The word 'children' is plural, but 'a' indicates singular. The correct singular form is 'child'.