图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了去图书馆的频率和原因，但句子结构较为混乱，存在语法错误，如“library always create the atmosphere that I can focus without”不完整。建议简化句子结构，注意主谓一致，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: Yes, I often go to the library during my school term, usually every weekday. The library is a quiet and comfortable place, which helps me concentrate better than in my dorm.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“Library always offend a range of research”不合适。建议使用更准确的词汇，简洁表达自己的活动，并用连接词衔接句子。

範例: I usually read journals or prepare my presentations in the library. Since I am about to graduate, I often use the library to finish my papers and conduct research.

建議: 回答内容较为完整，但存在语法错误和重复，如“and and no without any place”。建议注意语法和用词准确，避免重复，句子更连贯。

範例: Not really. The library was far from my home and school, and it was small with limited services. There was no proper place to study, so I rarely went there.

建議: 回答表达了观点，但有语法错误和重复，如“they can do they do it”。建议简化句子，注意语法，使用更准确的词汇表达观点。

範例: I don't think Chinese kids often go to the library because they usually study at home or school. Also, books are affordable in China, so many prefer to buy them instead of borrowing.

× I go to library very frequently during my school term, like every day during the weekdays and library is quite a quiet and comfortable place for studying and compared to my dorm, I think library always create the atmosphere that I can focus without.

✓ I go to the library very frequently during my school term, like every day during the weekdays, and the library is quite a quiet and comfortable place for studying. Compared to my dorm, I think the library always creates an atmosphere where I can focus.

“library”作为特指的图书馆，前面需要加定冠词“the”。此外，句子较长且缺少标点，影响理解，需分句处理。

× I think library always create the atmosphere that I can focus without.

✓ I think the library always creates an atmosphere where I can focus.

主语“library”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，变为“creates”。

× I I used to read journals or prefer my presentation and since I'm going to graduate and I have a lot academic task to work with, I already go to the library to finish my papers or do some research things.

✓ I used to read journals or prepare my presentations, and since I'm going to graduate and I have a lot of academic tasks to work on, I already go to the library to finish my papers or do some research.

“prefer my presentation”表达不当，应为“prepare my presentations”。“a lot academic task”缺少介词“of”，应为“a lot of academic tasks”。“research things”表达不准确，应简化为“research”。

× Library always offend a range of research.

✓ The library always offers a range of research resources.

“Library”前应加定冠词“the”。“offend”用词错误，应为“offer”。“a range of research”表达不完整，通常为“a range of research resources”。

× Library is quite small and limited.

✓ The library is quite small and limited.

“Library”作为特指名词，前面需要加定冠词“the”。

× It only offer a very basic boring service and and no without any place to work or study, so I seldom go to library.

✓ It only offers a very basic, boring service and has no place to work or study, so I seldom go to the library.

主语“it”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应为“offers”。“no without any place”表达重复且错误，应改为“has no place”。“library”前应加定冠词“the”。

× so I seldom go to library.

✓ so I seldom go to the library.

“library”作为特指名词，前面需要加定冠词“the”。

× if they need to study or writing, uh they can do they do it at home or school.

✓ if they need to study or write, they can do it at home or school.

“need to”后应接动词原形，“writing”应改为“write”。

× But if they want to borrow some book, I think book in China is really affordable so they can buy it without borrowing them.

✓ But if they want to borrow some books, I think books in China are really affordable so they can buy them without borrowing.

“some book”应为复数“some books”。“book in China is”应为复数“books in China are”。“buy it without borrowing them”中“it”与“them”指代不一致，应统一为“them”。