图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: आपके उत्तर में व्याकरण और वाक्य संरचना में सुधार की आवश्यकता है। "go library" के बजाय "go to the library" कहना चाहिए। उत्तर को संक्षिप्त और स्पष्ट बनाएं, और विषय वाक्य के बाद अतिरिक्त विवरण जोड़ें।

範例: Yes, I usually go to the library on weekends with my sister. I want to become a heart doctor, so I use the library to study and do research related to my field.

建議: आपके उत्तर में वाक्य संरचना और शब्दों का सही उपयोग आवश्यक है। "in library" के बजाय "in the library" कहें। साथ ही, उत्तर को अधिक संगठित और संक्षिप्त बनाएं, और लिंकिंग शब्दों का उपयोग करें।

範例: In the library, I usually read newspapers to stay updated with current events. Additionally, I read books to enhance my knowledge, and sometimes I do research on my subjects.

建議: आपके उत्तर में व्याकरण और स्पष्टता की कमी है। "when I was scared" का अर्थ स्पष्ट नहीं है। वाक्यों को सरल और स्पष्ट बनाएं, और सही व्याकरण का उपयोग करें।

範例: No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because I was not serious about my studies at that time. I did not have much interest in studying.

建議: आपके उत्तर में व्याकरण सुधार की आवश्यकता है। "go to library" के बजाय "go to the library" कहें। साथ ही, उत्तर को अधिक स्पष्ट और प्राकृतिक बनाएं।

範例: Yes, I think most Chinese children often go to the library to enhance their knowledge and to focus on their career goals.

× Yes, I usually go library on my weekends with my sister because I completed my +2 from CPC school and I want to become a doctor of heart and for that purpose I go to library and do a research.

✓ Yes, I usually go to the library on my weekends with my sister because I completed my +2 from CPC school and I want to become a heart doctor and for that purpose I go to the library and do research.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' because it refers to a specific place. Also, 'a doctor of heart' is incorrect; the correct term is 'a heart doctor'. The phrase 'do a research' is incorrect because 'research' is an uncountable noun and does not take an article 'a'. सही प्रयोग के लिए 'the' आर्टिकल का उपयोग आवश्यक है क्योंकि 'library' एक विशेष स्थान को दर्शाता है। 'a doctor of heart' गलत है, सही होगा 'a heart doctor'। 'do a research' गलत है क्योंकि 'research' एक अनगिनत संज्ञा है और इसके साथ 'a' का प्रयोग नहीं होता।

× I do many things in library like I read newspaper to become up to date and also know about what is going in the world or I also read books in the library for enhance my knowledge and some time I do research on my subject.

✓ I do many things in the library like reading newspapers to stay up to date and also know about what is going on in the world. I also read books in the library to enhance my knowledge and sometimes I do research on my subject.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' because it refers to a specific place. 'Read newspaper' should be 'reading newspapers' to indicate habitual action and plural form. 'For enhance' should be 'to enhance' as the correct infinitive form. 'Some time' should be 'sometimes' as the correct adverb. 'library' से पहले 'the' आर्टिकल आवश्यक है क्योंकि यह एक विशेष स्थान को दर्शाता है। 'read newspaper' की जगह 'reading newspapers' सही है क्योंकि यह नियमित क्रिया और बहुवचन दर्शाता है। 'for enhance' गलत है, सही होगा 'to enhance'। 'some time' की जगह 'sometimes' सही है।

× No, when I was scared, I was not a go to library because at that time I'm not. I'm not too much serious about my studies and I don't have any passion of study and that's why I can't go to library.

✓ No, when I was a kid, I did not go to the library because at that time I was not very serious about my studies and I didn't have any passion for studying and that's why I couldn't go to the library.

'Was scared' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'was a kid' or similar. 'Was not a go to library' is grammatically incorrect; the correct past tense is 'did not go to the library'. 'I'm not' should be 'I was not' to maintain past tense consistency. 'Too much serious' should be 'very serious'. 'Passion of study' should be 'passion for studying'. 'Can't go' should be 'couldn't go' to match past tense. 'was scared' गलत है, सही होगा 'was a kid'। 'was not a go to library' गलत है, सही होगा 'did not go to the library'। 'I'm not' की जगह 'I was not' होना चाहिए। 'too much serious' की जगह 'very serious' सही है। 'passion of study' की जगह 'passion for studying' सही है। 'can't go' की जगह 'couldn't go' होना चाहिए।

× No, when I was scared, I was not a go to library because at that time I'm not. I'm not too much serious about my studies and I don't have any passion of study and that's why I can't go to library.

✓ No, when I was a kid, I did not go to the library because at that time I was not very serious about my studies and I didn't have any passion for studying and that's why I couldn't go to the library.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' because it refers to a specific place. Without 'the', the sentence is grammatically incorrect. 'library' से पहले 'the' आर्टिकल आवश्यक है क्योंकि यह एक विशेष स्थान को दर्शाता है। बिना 'the' के वाक्य व्याकरणिक रूप से गलत है।

× Yes, according to me, most children go to library for enhance their knowledge and for getting their career on a single track.

✓ Yes, according to me, most children go to the library to enhance their knowledge and to get their career on a single track.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' because it refers to a specific place. 'For enhance' should be 'to enhance' as the correct infinitive form. 'For getting' should be 'to get' to maintain parallel structure. 'library' से पहले 'the' आर्टिकल आवश्यक है क्योंकि यह एक विशेष स्थान को दर्शाता है। 'for enhance' गलत है, सही होगा 'to enhance'। 'for getting' की जगह 'to get' सही है ताकि वाक्य संरचना समान रहे।