图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be more grammatically correct and concise. Avoid repetition and use proper verb forms. Also, try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words.

範例: Yes, I go to the library every day because it is a very quiet place. Therefore, I can concentrate easily on my studies and complete my syllabus on time.

建議: Your answer should be clearer and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition and keep your sentences concise.

範例: When I go to the library, I usually start by reading my subjects. Then, I complete my assignments, and finally, I submit my work using my laptop.

建議: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use correct verb tenses and clearer vocabulary. Also, provide specific details to support your answer and use linking words for coherence.

範例: Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid because it had many books about adventures and fairy tales. Therefore, I enjoyed visiting the library during my childhood.

建議: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Use proper sentence structure and vocabulary. Also, provide specific reasons and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library from a young age because they are intelligent and prefer reading books to learn new things.

× Yes, I am go to the library every day because the library is a very quiet place and in the library I was I I am easily concentrated in the my studies and completed my whole syllabus.

✓ Yes, I go to the library every day because the library is a very quiet place and in the library I can easily concentrate on my studies and complete my whole syllabus.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'am go' instead of the simple present tense 'go' for habitual action. Also, 'I was I I am easily concentrated' is incorrect; it should be 'I can easily concentrate' to express ability in present tense. 'Concentrated' is a past participle used incorrectly here. 'Completed' should be 'complete' to match the habitual present action. The phrase 'in the my studies' is incorrect; it should be 'on my studies'. Suggestion: Use simple present tense for habitual actions and correct verb forms to express ability and ongoing actions.

× A number of things I'll do in the library like when I was go to the library, first I really start the reading about my whole subject, then I completed my assignment and in the last I'll complete the my all submission in the with the help of laptop.

✓ A number of things I do in the library like when I go to the library, first I really start reading about my whole subject, then I complete my assignment and in the end I complete all my submissions with the help of a laptop.

The sentence mixes future tense 'I'll do' with present and past tenses incorrectly. 'When I was go' is wrong; it should be 'when I go' for habitual action. 'Start the reading' should be 'start reading' as 'reading' is a gerund here. 'Completed' should be 'complete' to maintain present tense for habitual actions. 'In the last' is better expressed as 'in the end'. 'The my all submission' is incorrect; it should be 'all my submissions'. Also, 'in the with the help of laptop' is incorrect; it should be 'with the help of a laptop'. Suggestion: Maintain consistent present tense for habitual actions and correct article and preposition usage.

× Yes, I was going to the library when I was a kid because in the library she sends many books are from related to Khatron and some fairy tale stories. So I'll visited the library in my childhood.

✓ Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid because the library has many books related to Khatron and some fairy tale stories. So I visited the library in my childhood.

'I was going' is acceptable but 'used to go' better expresses habitual past action. 'She sends many books are from related to Khatron' is incorrect; it should be 'the library has many books related to Khatron'. 'I'll visited' is incorrect; it should be 'I visited' for past tense. 'In my childhood' is acceptable. Suggestion: Use 'used to' for habitual past actions and correct subject-verb agreement and sentence structure.

× Yes, Chinese kids when you go to the library when they start their childhood phase because the they have a very smart mind and they are preferred to the reading books.

✓ Yes, Chinese kids go to the library when they start their childhood phase because they have very smart minds and they prefer reading books.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'when you go' instead of 'when they go'. 'They are preferred to the reading books' is incorrect; it should be 'they prefer reading books'. 'A very smart mind' should be plural 'very smart minds' to agree with plural subject 'kids'. Suggestion: Use correct pronouns matching the subject, correct verb forms for preferences, and plural forms for plural subjects.