图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤りや繰り返しがあり、意味が少し不明瞭です。例えば、「I'll always go to library」ではなく「I always go to the library」が正しいです。また、「I always inspired. I am always inspired by.」は不完全な文です。より明確で簡潔な表現を心がけましょう。

範例: Yes, I always go to the library to study in the self-study room because many people there are focused, which inspires me to concentrate as well.

建議: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。例えば、「I'll always study instead of the studying room」は不自然で、「I always study in the study room」が適切です。また、「borrow Mr. Books」は誤りで、「borrow books」が正しいです。具体的で明確な表現を使いましょう。

範例: I usually study in the study room, and sometimes I borrow books by my favorite authors because their books are very popular and hard to buy in bookstores.

建議: 文法の誤りと不自然な表現があります。「tried to me to make habit」は誤りで、「tried to help me develop a habit」が正しいです。また、時制の一致も注意しましょう。

範例: Yes, I went to the library often because my mother tried to help me develop a habit of reading many books.

建議: 文が不完全で意味が伝わりにくいです。文法の誤りも多く、話の流れが途切れています。より明確で完全な文を作る練習が必要です。

範例: I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because their parents work hard to provide good education for them, so they encourage their children to study there.

× Yes, I'll always go to library to study in self self study room.

✓ Yes, I always go to the library to study in the self-study room.

'Library' and 'self-study room' are specific places, so the definite article 'the' is required before them. Also, 'I'll always go' is incorrect for habitual action; 'I always go' is appropriate.

× So I always inspired. I am always inspired by.

✓ So I am always inspired.

The phrase 'I always inspired' is incomplete and incorrect. The correct passive form is 'I am always inspired.' The second sentence 'I am always inspired by' is incomplete and should be omitted or completed.

× I'll always study instead of the studying room, and sometimes I borrow Mr. Books because my favorite author's book are very popular.

✓ I always study in the study room, and sometimes I borrow books because my favorite author's books are very popular.

'I'll always study' is incorrect for habitual action; 'I always study' is correct. 'Instead of the studying room' is incorrect; it should be 'in the study room.' 'Mr. Books' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'books' is appropriate. Also, 'book are' should be 'books are' due to plural subject.

× my favorite author's book are very popular.

✓ my favorite author's books are very popular.

The subject refers to multiple books, so the plural form 'books' should be used to agree with the plural verb 'are'.

× Yes, because my mother tried to me to make habit to read a lot of books, so I always go to the library.

✓ Yes, because my mother tried to make me develop a habit of reading a lot of books, so I always went to the library.

'Tried to me to make habit' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'tried to make me develop a habit.' Also, 'I always go' should be in past tense 'I always went' to match the past context.

× my mother tried to me to make habit to read a lot of books

✓ my mother tried to make me develop a habit of reading a lot of books

The preposition 'to' after 'tried' is incorrect here. The correct structure is 'tried to make me develop a habit of reading.' Also, 'make habit to read' is incorrect; it should be 'make me develop a habit of reading.'

× I think so because Chinese parents tend to try hard to education for them their children so.

✓ I think so because Chinese parents tend to try hard to educate their children.

The phrase 'try hard to education for them their children' is ungrammatical. The correct verb form is 'try hard to educate their children.' Also, 'for them their children' is redundant and incorrect.

× They'll they'll take.

✓ They'll take them.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'them' clarifies the object of 'take.' Also, the repeated 'they'll' is an error.