图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lặp lại thông tin và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp. Hãy tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể hơn.

範例: Yes, I often go to the library twice a day because it helps me relax and feel happy throughout the day.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn về hoạt động cụ thể bạn làm trong thư viện. Sử dụng câu có cấu trúc đúng và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về sở thích của bạn.

範例: In the library, I usually read books, especially about artificial intelligence, because I am very interested in learning more about this field.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng và diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc hơn. Hãy giải thích lý do cụ thể vì sao bạn không thích đến thư viện khi còn nhỏ.

範例: No, I did not often go to the library when I was a child because I was shy and afraid of crowded places.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách trực tiếp và tránh đưa ra nhận xét không liên quan hoặc không phù hợp. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tập trung vào nội dung câu hỏi.

範例: I am not sure about Chinese kids, but I think many of them are hardworking and probably often go to the library to study.

× I often go to the library twice a day, twice of the day and I think library can give me to relax and feeling happy to one day.

✓ I often go to the library twice a day, and I think the library can help me relax and feel happy throughout the day.

The phrase 'twice of the day' is incorrect; 'twice a day' is the correct expression. 'Library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place. Also, 'feeling happy to one day' is ungrammatical; it should be 'feel happy throughout the day' to express continuous feeling.

× I often go to the library twice a day, twice of the day and I think library can give me to relax and feeling happy to one day.

✓ I often go to the library twice a day, and I think the library can help me relax and feel happy throughout the day.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect in this context.

× I often go to the library twice a day, twice of the day and I think library can give me to relax and feeling happy to one day.

✓ I often go to the library twice a day, and I think the library can help me relax and feel happy throughout the day.

After 'can', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'feeling' should be 'feel'.

× I usually do in the library to like read a book and starting everything I want and all the world.

✓ I usually do things in the library like reading a book and starting everything I want about the world.

The preposition 'in' should be placed after 'do' to indicate location. Also, 'to like read' is incorrect; it should be 'like reading'. 'Starting everything I want and all the world' is unclear and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× I usually do in the library to like read a book and starting everything I want and all the world.

✓ I usually do things in the library like reading a book and starting everything I want about the world.

After 'like', the verb should be in the '-ing' form, so 'read' should be 'reading'. Also, 'starting' is correctly in '-ing' form here as a gerund.

× I can study the AI and I like the AI and so I think I want to know more.

✓ I can study AI and I like AI, so I think I want to know more.

'AI' as a general field does not require the definite article 'the'. Using 'the AI' is incorrect unless referring to a specific AI system.

× I think it's no umm, when I were kids, I can read, I can listening.

✓ I think not, umm, when I was a kid, I could read, I could listen.

'Were' should be 'was' for singular 'I'. 'Kids' should be 'a kid' to match singular subject. 'Can' should be changed to past tense 'could' to match past time. 'Listening' should be 'listen' as base verb after modal.

× I will umm a little girl.

✓ I was a little girl.

'Will' is incorrect here; the speaker refers to past time, so 'was' is appropriate. Also, 'I will a little girl' is ungrammatical; the verb 'be' is needed.

× So I really so scared about the pupil.

✓ So I was really so scared of the pupils.

'Pupil' should be plural 'pupils' if referring to multiple students. Also, 'scared about' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'scared of'. The verb 'was' is needed to indicate past tense.

× So I don't like go to the library in the crowded pupil.

✓ So I don't like going to the library when it is crowded with pupils.

'In the crowded pupil' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'when it is crowded with pupils'. Also, 'like go' should be 'like going'.

× So I think I quite people.

✓ So I think I like quiet places.

'Quite people' is incorrect; likely intended 'quiet people' or 'quiet places'. 'Quiet places' fits better in context. Also, 'quite' is an adverb, 'quiet' is the adjective needed here.

× I don't know a Chinese kid.

✓ I don't know Chinese kids.

'A Chinese kid' is singular, but the question is about Chinese kids in general, so plural 'Chinese kids' is appropriate.

× Often they go to the library because I am the kids in Vietnam.

✓ Often they go to the library because I am a kid in Vietnam.

'The kids' is incorrect here; 'a kid' is singular and appropriate for self-reference. Also, 'the kids' implies a specific group, which is not intended.

× But I think Chinese in the case like go to the library, they are so really hardworking and really handsome.

✓ But I think Chinese people like to go to the library; they are really hardworking and very smart.

'So really hardworking' is awkward; 'really hardworking' is sufficient. 'Really handsome' is inappropriate when referring to a group; 'very smart' or 'diligent' fits better. 'In the case' is unnecessary and confusing.