图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有點冗長且語法不太自然。建議你直接回答問題，並用簡潔的句子說明原因，避免重複。

範例: Yes, I usually go to the library about six days a week this month because I need a quiet place to prepare for my AIR exam.

建議: 回答不夠流暢且語法錯誤較多。建議直接回答問題，並用連接詞使句子更連貫。

範例: I usually study and prepare for my exams in the library because it is quiet and helps me concentrate.

建議: 回答中有語法錯誤且內容不夠清楚。建議用正確的時態和句型，並清楚表達頻率和原因。

範例: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid because my mom wanted me to read books to improve my knowledge. I usually went once a month.

建議: 回答內容有點冗長且語法不自然。建議用更簡潔的句子，並用連接詞使句子更流暢。

範例: I don't think many Chinese kids often go to the library because some parents worry that the books might be unhygienic, so they don't allow their children to visit.

× I think my frequency to go to library is about six days a week in this month is because I have to focus and to prepare my AIR exam.

✓ I think my frequency of going to the library is about six days a week this month because I have to focus and prepare for my AIR exam.

The phrase 'frequency to go to library' is incorrect; it should be 'frequency of going to the library' to use the correct preposition and gerund form. Also, 'in this month is because' is awkward; 'this month because' is clearer. 'To prepare my AIR exam' should be 'prepare for my AIR exam' to use the correct preposition after 'prepare'. (English explanation for Taiwan learners)

× As I mentioned earlier, over my time in library is for preparation of my exam.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, most of my time in the library is for preparing for my exam.

The phrase 'over my time in library' is incorrect; 'most of my time in the library' is appropriate. Also, 'preparation of my exam' should be 'preparing for my exam' to use the correct verb form and preposition. (English explanation for Taiwan learners)

× In the other time I won't go to library.

✓ At other times, I don't go to the library.

The phrase 'In the other time' is incorrect; 'At other times' is the correct expression. Also, 'go to library' should be 'go to the library' to use the definite article. (English explanation for Taiwan learners)

× Yep, I often go to library because my mom want me to book to improve my knowledge as a resale.

✓ Yep, I often went to the library because my mom wanted me to read books to improve my knowledge as a result.

The sentence is about past habits, so 'go' should be 'went' and 'want' should be 'wanted' to match past tense. 'Go to library' needs the article 'the library'. 'To book' is incorrect; it should be 'to read books'. 'As a resale' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'as a result'. (English explanation for Taiwan learners)

× I think I went to library about one time a month in my.

✓ I think I went to the library about once a month when I was young.

'One time' is better expressed as 'once'. 'Go to library' needs the article 'the library'. The phrase 'in my' is incomplete and unclear; 'when I was young' or 'when I was a kid' fits better. (English explanation for Taiwan learners)

× I don't think so. I know that a lot of parents prohibit their children to go to the library for healthy concern is because their parents always thinking about the books from library is pretty unhygienic, so they don't let them go to library.

✓ I don't think so. I know that a lot of parents prohibit their children from going to the library due to health concerns because they think the books from the library are pretty unhygienic, so they don't let them go to the library.

'Prohibit their children to go' should be 'prohibit their children from going' to use the correct preposition and gerund. 'For healthy concern is because' is awkward; 'due to health concerns because' is better. 'Their parents always thinking' should be 'they think'. 'Books from library' needs 'the library'. 'Go to library' needs 'the library'. (English explanation for Taiwan learners)