图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "Now this is I can study" and "So I rather study home." Try to use more natural expressions and correct sentence structures. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly.

範例: No, I rarely go to the library because I can study and do research online using my laptop and mobile phone. Therefore, I prefer studying at home rather than going to the library.

建議: Your answer is relevant and provides examples, but the sentence structure is a bit awkward. Try to use linking words to connect ideas more smoothly and correct prepositions, such as "study history of" should be "study the history of."

範例: I haven't visited the library recently, but whenever I did, I usually studied the history of different places. For example, I read about the history of Greece and the rise and fall of the Ottoman Empire.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "we would find ourselves book" and "interesting topic." Try to use plural forms correctly and improve sentence flow with linking words.

範例: Yes, when I was a kid, I used to visit the library frequently. We often went in groups and found books about history and biology, which were very interesting topics for us. Therefore, we enjoyed studying them in the library.

建議: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more formal linking words and avoiding informal phrases like "addicted to mobile phones." Also, try to make your reasoning more concise and coherent.

範例: I believe Chinese kids do not go to the library often because, during my visit to China last year, I noticed that many people frequently use their mobile phones. Therefore, I assume that most people prefer to search online when they need information or new ideas.

× Now this is I can study or do any kind of research online using my laptops and mobile phones.

✓ Now I can study or do any kind of research online using my laptop and mobile phone.

The original sentence has an incorrect structure with 'Now this is I can study'. It should be rephrased to 'Now I can study' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'laptops' and 'mobile phones' should be singular to match the context of the speaker's own devices.

× So I rather study home than going to the library.

✓ So I would rather study at home than go to the library.

The phrase 'study home' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at' before 'home'. Also, 'rather' is typically followed by 'would rather' and the verb should be in base form after 'than', so 'go' instead of 'going'.

× It has been a while, I haven't had a visit to the library, but whenever I went to the library, I studied about the history of different places, for example, history of Greece and the rise and fall of Ottoman Empire.

✓ It has been a while since I visited the library, but whenever I went, I studied the history of different places, for example, the history of Greece and the rise and fall of the Ottoman Empire.

The phrase 'I haven't had a visit to the library' is awkward; 'since I visited the library' is more natural. 'Studied about' is incorrect; 'studied' does not require 'about'. Also, 'history of Greece' and 'rise and fall of Ottoman Empire' need definite articles 'the' before 'history' and 'Ottoman Empire'.

× we would find ourselves book about history and biology.

✓ we would find ourselves books about history and biology.

The word 'book' should be plural 'books' to match 'find ourselves'. Also, 'about' is correct here as it introduces the subjects of the books.

× It was very interesting topic for us, so we enjoyed studying about them in the library.

✓ It was a very interesting topic for us, so we enjoyed studying them in the library.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'very interesting topic'. Also, 'studying about them' is incorrect; 'studying them' is correct because 'study' does not require 'about' when followed by an object.

× I believe Chinese kids don't go to library often because when I visited China last year I saw everyone addicted to mobile phones.

✓ I believe Chinese kids don't go to the library often because when I visited China last year I saw everyone addicted to mobile phones.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library' because it refers to a specific place.