图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ответ должен быть более естественным и грамматически правильным. Избегайте повторений и используйте связующие слова для плавности речи. Например, вместо "I now I'm preparing to the IELTS exam and I'm preferred to preparing well to this exam" лучше сказать "Currently, I am preparing for the IELTS exam, so I prefer to focus on my studies and don't have much free time to read books."

範例: No, I don't go to the library often. Currently, I am preparing for the IELTS exam, so I prefer to focus on my studies and don't have much free time to read books.

建議: Ответ должен быть более связным и грамматически правильным. Используйте связующие слова для логичности и избегайте ошибок в согласовании. Например, вместо "I am looking for a books that I want to purchase" лучше сказать "I usually look for books that I want to purchase."

範例: I usually look for books that I want to purchase. I enjoy reading detective novels because they are gripping and impressive, which gives me positive emotions. Therefore, I search for such books in the library.

建議: Ответ содержит паузы и нечеткости. Следует избегать слов-паразитов и использовать более точные выражения. Также стоит использовать связующие слова для плавности. Например, "I didn't go to the library often as a child because I was busy with school and other activities. Moreover, I wasn't familiar with different book genres, so I wasn't very interested in visiting the library."

範例: I didn't go to the library often as a child because I was busy with school and other activities. Moreover, I wasn't familiar with different book genres, so I wasn't very interested in visiting the library. Instead, I preferred reading at home.

建議: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткую структуру. Следует использовать более точные выражения и связующие слова. Например, "I think it depends on the individual because some children prefer other activities over reading. However, in my opinion, the majority of Chinese kids enjoy going to the library to read interesting books."

範例: I think it depends on the individual because some children prefer other activities over reading. However, in my opinion, the majority of Chinese kids enjoy going to the library to read interesting books.

× I now I'm preparing to the IELTS exam and I'm preferred to preparing well to this exam and I don't have much free time to read the books and that's all.

✓ I am now preparing for the IELTS exam and I prefer to prepare well for this exam, so I don't have much free time to read books, and that's all.

The modal verb 'prefer' should be used in the present simple form 'prefer' instead of 'am preferred'. Also, 'preparing to' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'preparing for'. Additionally, 'the books' is incorrect here because it refers to books in general, so 'books' without 'the' is appropriate.

× I am looking for a books that I want to purchase and I would like to read books such as Detective which are gripping and impressive and gives me more positive emotions.

✓ I am looking for books that I want to purchase and I would like to read books such as detective novels which are gripping and impressive and give me more positive emotions.

The phrase 'a books' is incorrect because 'a' is used with singular nouns, but 'books' is plural. Also, 'Detective' should be pluralized or clarified as 'detective novels'. The verb 'gives' should be 'give' to agree with the plural subject 'books'.

× I now I'm preparing to the IELTS exam and I'm preferred to preparing well to this exam and I don't have much free time to read the books and that's all.

✓ I am now preparing for the IELTS exam and I prefer to prepare well for this exam, so I don't have much free time to read books, and that's all.

The correct preposition after 'preparing' is 'for', not 'to'. Similarly, 'preferred to preparing' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to prepare'.

× Instead, I prefer reading.

✓ Instead, I preferred reading.

Since the context is about the past ('when I was a kid'), the verb should be in the past tense 'preferred' instead of the present tense 'prefer'.

× So I in my opinion some more majority of Chinese kids prefer to go to library and read interesting books.

✓ So, in my opinion, the majority of Chinese kids prefer to go to the library and read interesting books.

The phrase 'some more majority' is incorrect; 'the majority' is the correct expression. Also, 'to library' needs the definite article 'the' to become 'to the library'. The pronoun 'I' is misplaced and unnecessary in this sentence.