图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp như thiếu mạo từ và sai thì. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói về thói quen hiện tại và quá khứ một cách rõ ràng hơn.

範例: No, I don't often go to the library now because I am very busy. However, when I was a child, I used to visit the library regularly because it had many comic books and novels that made me love literature.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là thì và số nhiều, cũng như sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi hiện tại, không chỉ nói về quá khứ.

範例: Usually, I read comic books in the library because they are more interesting to me than novels. The pictures help me understand the story better and encourage me to think critically.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý sử dụng thì quá khứ cho phù hợp và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể được làm rõ hơn bằng cách sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý.

範例: Yes, I did. I always went to the library when I was a kid because I enjoyed reading novels, comics, and science books. They helped me think critically and learn new things, so I really enjoyed my reading time.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng, và giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc hơn.

範例: In my opinion, many Chinese kids often go to the library because it provides access to electronic newspapers and many documents that help them study better.

× No I don't, I'm too busy to go to the library but when I was a kid I always went to library because it has many comic books and novel for me to read and it's make me love literature and life.

✓ No I don't, I'm too busy to go to the library but when I was a kid I always went to the library because it has many comic books and novels for me to read and it makes me love literature and life.

The sentence misses the definite article 'the' before 'library' which is necessary when referring to a specific place. 'Novel' should be plural 'novels' to match 'comic books' (plural). 'It's make' is incorrect; the verb should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× No I don't, I'm too busy to go to the library but when I was a kid I always went to library because it has many comic books and novel for me to read and it's make me love literature and life.

✓ No I don't, I'm too busy to go to the library but when I was a kid I always went to the library because it has many comic books and novels for me to read and it makes me love literature and life.

The noun 'novel' should be plural 'novels' to be consistent with 'comic books' and to correctly express multiple items.

× No I don't, I'm too busy to go to the library but when I was a kid I always went to library because it has many comic books and novel for me to read and it's make me love literature and life.

✓ No I don't, I'm too busy to go to the library but when I was a kid I always went to the library because it has many comic books and novels for me to read and it makes me love literature and life.

'It' is a singular subject, so the verb should be 'makes' instead of 'make' to agree in third person singular.

× Well, when I was a kid I usually choose comic books instead of novel because is were more interesting to me.

✓ Well, when I was a kid I usually chose comic books instead of novels because they were more interesting to me.

'Choose' should be past tense 'chose' to match 'when I was a kid'. 'Novel' should be plural 'novels' to match 'comic books'. 'Is were' is incorrect; 'they were' is correct to refer to plural 'novels'.

× Well, when I was a kid I usually choose comic books instead of novel because is were more interesting to me.

✓ Well, when I was a kid I usually chose comic books instead of novels because they were more interesting to me.

'Choose' is present tense; past tense 'chose' is needed to match the past time frame 'when I was a kid'.

× Well, when I was a kid I usually choose comic books instead of novel because is were more interesting to me.

✓ Well, when I was a kid I usually chose comic books instead of novels because they were more interesting to me.

'Is were' is incorrect; the correct pronoun for plural 'novels' is 'they' and the verb should be 'were'.

× I like them because the picture helping me understand the story better and encourage me to think critically.

✓ I like them because the pictures help me understand the story better and encourage me to think critically.

'The picture helping' is incorrect; it should be 'pictures help' to correctly use plural and verb form. Also, 'helping' should be 'help' to match the subject and tense.

× I like them because the picture helping me understand the story better and encourage me to think critically.

✓ I like them because the pictures help me understand the story better and encourage me to think critically.

'Helping' should be changed to 'help' to correctly function as a verb in the present tense with plural subject 'pictures'.

× Yes I did. I always go to the library when I was a kid.

✓ Yes I did. I always went to the library when I was a kid.

'Go' is present tense; past tense 'went' is needed to match 'when I was a kid'.

× I often visit it to read novels, comics, and science books because they help me think critically and learn new things.

✓ I often visited it to read novels, comics, and science books because they helped me think critically and learn new things.

'Often visit' is present tense; since the context is past ('when I was a kid'), past tense 'visited' and 'helped' should be used.

× I really enjoy reading time.

✓ I really enjoy reading time.

The phrase 'reading time' is awkward; it would be better to say 'I really enjoy reading' or 'I really enjoy my reading time' for clarity.

× In my opinion, I think Chinese kids always go to the library because the E newspaper so that the Chinese student like to study in library because it's have many document information about what they study.

✓ In my opinion, I think Chinese kids always go to the library because of the e-newspaper, so Chinese students like to study in the library because it has many documents and information about what they study.

'Because the E newspaper' is incomplete; 'because of the e-newspaper' is correct. 'Student' should be plural 'students'. 'It's have' is incorrect; 'it has' is correct. 'Document information' should be 'documents and information'.

× In my opinion, I think Chinese kids always go to the library because the E newspaper so that the Chinese student like to study in library because it's have many document information about what they study.

✓ In my opinion, I think Chinese kids always go to the library because of the e-newspaper, so Chinese students like to study in the library because it has many documents and information about what they study.

'Because the E newspaper' should be 'because of the e-newspaper'. Also, 'study in library' should be 'study in the library' with the definite article.