图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh lặp lại và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi. Bạn nên nói rõ lý do bạn thường đến thư viện và hoạt động bạn làm ở đó.

範例: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet place where I can concentrate. However, I usually don't read books there; instead, I prefer to study or use my laptop.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh câu trả lời không rõ ràng hoặc lặp lại. Hãy mô tả cụ thể hoạt động bạn làm trong thư viện và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Usually, I use Facebook or browse the internet on my phone in the library because I find borrowing books boring.

建議: Bạn cần sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng cách và tránh lặp từ. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể về cảm nhận của bạn khi còn nhỏ và hiện tại.

範例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a child because I didn't like reading books. However, now that I am older, I enjoy reading much more.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và không trả lời đúng câu hỏi. Hãy cố gắng trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và cung cấp ý kiến hoặc thông tin cụ thể về thói quen của trẻ em Trung Quốc.

範例: I think many Chinese kids do go to the library to study and read books, as it helps them with their education.

× Yes I do. I often go to the library so I think it is this place is quiet.

✓ Yes, I do. I often go to the library because I think this place is quiet.

The original sentence has a redundant phrase 'it is this place is quiet' which causes confusion. The correct structure is 'I think this place is quiet.' Also, 'so' is better replaced with 'because' to show reason clearly.

× I don't. I don't like reading book when I come to library, Yes I don't like.

✓ I don't. I don't like reading books when I come to the library. Yes, I don't like it.

The sentence lacks the article 'the' before 'library' and 'book' should be plural 'books' to match the context. Also, 'I don't like' needs an object, so 'it' is added for clarity.

× I use the Facebook in the library because I think I like boring borrowing the book when I buy it. Yes.

✓ I use Facebook in the library because I think I find borrowing books boring when I buy them. Yes.

'Facebook' does not need 'the' before it. The phrase 'I like boring borrowing the book' is incorrect; it should be 'I find borrowing books boring.' Also, 'book' should be plural 'books' and 'it' changed to 'them' to agree with plural.

× No, I didn't. I don't like go into the library when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't. I didn't like going into the library when I was a child.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'I don't like go' should be 'I didn't like going' to match past tense context. Also, 'go into' should be 'going into' after 'like'.

× I don't like reading a book, but when I when I when I am tall I will like book very much.

✓ I didn't like reading books, but when I am tall, I will like books very much.

The sentence has tense inconsistency and repetition. 'I don't like' should be 'I didn't like' to match past context. 'When I am tall' is acceptable for future reference, but 'book' should be plural 'books.' Also, repeated 'when I' is removed.

× Says like do Chinese kids often go to the library is good, but I don't think a kids should go to the library.

✓ Saying that Chinese kids often go to the library is good, but I don't think kids should go to the library.

The sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect article usage. 'Says like do' is incorrect; 'Saying that' is better. 'A kids' is wrong; 'kids' is plural and does not need 'a.'

× I thought they go to wake my family.

✓ I thought they go to visit my family.

The phrase 'go to wake my family' is incorrect and unclear. Likely intended meaning is 'go to visit my family.' 'Wake' is not appropriate here.