图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but needs improvement in grammar and clarity. Instead of 'Me and my friend', say 'My friend and I'. Also, avoid redundancy like 'which is our favorite books'. Try to be more natural and concise.

範例: Yes, I often go to the library with my friend. We enjoy reading our favorite books there.

建議: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear parts. Use correct verb forms like 'I usually study'. Avoid unnecessary numbers like '86'. Also, provide a clear topic sentence and supporting details with linking words.

範例: I usually study in the library because I am an English literature student. Therefore, I like to read Shakespeare's plays there.

建議: Your answer is relevant but has a small mistake: libraries usually lend books rather than sell them. Also, use 'to buy books' instead of 'for buying my books'. Add linking words to improve flow.

範例: When I was a kid, I often went to the library with my father to borrow books for reading.

建議: Your answer has confusing phrases like 'seldom frequently present libraries'. Try to use simpler and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to connect ideas and check grammar, e.g., 'reading programs' plural. Be specific and coherent.

範例: Yes, many Chinese children often visit libraries, especially in cities where libraries are easily accessible. Libraries offer a quiet place to study and a variety of books for school and personal interests. For example, on weekends, children often join reading programs.

× Yes, I often go to the library with my friend. Me and my friend read books in the library which is our favorite books.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library with my friend. My friend and I read books in the library which are our favorite books.

The pronoun 'Me' is incorrectly used as the subject of the sentence. The correct subject pronoun is 'I'. Also, 'which is our favorite books' is incorrect because 'books' is plural, so the verb should be 'are'. Use 'My friend and I' instead of 'Me and my friend' for proper subject pronoun usage.

× Actually I doing my study, I'm a student of English literature, that's why I like to read Shakespeare's books 86.

✓ Actually, I am studying, I'm a student of English literature, that's why I like to read Shakespeare's books.

The phrase 'I doing my study' is incorrect because the verb 'doing' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'my study' is awkward; 'studying' is better. The number '86' seems out of place and is removed for clarity.

× Actually, when I was a kid, I went to the library with my father for buying my books.

✓ Actually, when I was a kid, I went to the library with my father to buy my books.

The phrase 'for buying' is incorrect; after 'went to the library', the infinitive form 'to buy' should be used to express purpose.

× Yes, many Chinese seldom frequently present libraries, especially in urban areas where access to such facilities is easier.

✓ Yes, many Chinese seldom or frequently visit libraries, especially in urban areas where access to such facilities is easier.

The phrase 'seldom frequently present libraries' is confusing and incorrect. 'Seldom' and 'frequently' are contradictory adverbs and should not be used together without clarification. Also, 'present libraries' is incorrect; the verb 'visit' is appropriate here.

× Libraries provide a quiet environment for studying and offer a wide range of books that support their school or can personal interest.

✓ Libraries provide a quiet environment for studying and offer a wide range of books that support their school or personal interests.

The phrase 'can personal interest' is incorrect. It should be 'personal interests' to correctly express the idea. Also, 'their school or personal interests' is parallel and clear.

× For example, during weekends or a holiday, it is common to see kids attending reading program.

✓ For example, during weekends or holidays, it is common to see kids attending reading programs.

The phrase 'a holiday' should be plural 'holidays' to match 'weekends'. Also, 'reading program' should be plural 'reading programs' to indicate multiple sessions or types of programs.