图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct articles ('a' exam should be 'an' exam), and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, say 'I often go to the library when I need to work on a project or prepare for an exam because it is a quiet and calm environment that helps me concentrate.'

範例: I often go to the library when I need to work on a project or prepare for an exam because it is a quiet and calm environment that helps me concentrate.

建議: Your answer is repetitive and has grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'such as' to clarify. For instance, 'In the library, I usually work on my university projects or study for exams.'

範例: In the library, I usually work on my university projects or study for exams to prepare myself well.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and clearer linking words. Instead of 'plans', use 'programs' or 'activities'. Also, connect ideas smoothly. For example, 'When I was a kid, I used to go to the library often because they had many programs for children, especially during the summer, which I really enjoyed.'

範例: When I was a kid, I used to go to the library often because they had many programs for children, especially during the summer, which I really enjoyed.

建議: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Avoid starting with 'And' and incomplete sentences. Provide a clear opinion with reasons and linking words. For example, 'In my opinion, Chinese children often go to the library because their culture values education and organization.'

範例: In my opinion, Chinese children often go to the library because their culture values education and organization.

× Yes, I often go to libraries pick when I want to work on a project or I'm preparing myself for a exam because it's a call and calm environment and it can concentrate on my project.

✓ Yes, I often go to libraries when I want to work on a project or I'm preparing myself for an exam because it's a quiet and calm environment and I can concentrate on my project.

The word 'libraries pick' is incorrect; 'pick' is unnecessary and should be removed. 'a exam' should be 'an exam' because 'exam' starts with a vowel sound. 'call' should be 'quiet' to correctly describe the environment. 'it can concentrate' is incorrect because 'it' refers to the environment; the correct subject is 'I'. Therefore, 'I can concentrate' is correct.

× I usually work on my projects or for my work or my project for university or I study my lessons when I I'm preferring myself for for university exams.

✓ I usually work on my projects or my work for university, or I study my lessons when I am preparing myself for university exams.

The phrase 'for my work or my project for university' is awkward; 'my work for university' is clearer. 'I'm preferring myself' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'I am preparing myself'. Also, the repeated 'for for' is a mistake. The preposition 'for' is correctly used with 'preparing myself for university exams'.

× Actually, when I was a kid, I used to go to libraries and there were lots of plans for children, especially in the summer, and it was enjoyable for me to go to the library.

✓ Actually, when I was a kid, I used to go to libraries and there were lots of programs for children, especially in the summer, and it was enjoyable for me to go to the library.

The word 'plans' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'programs' meaning organized activities. The rest of the sentence is correct in past tense usage.

× And in my opinion, as Chinese people are organized people and really? Yes, they often use libraries.

✓ In my opinion, Chinese people are organized and really, yes, they often use libraries.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is generally informal and unnecessary here. The phrase 'and really?' is awkward and unclear; it should be rephrased for clarity. The corrected sentence removes unnecessary conjunctions and punctuation for better flow.