图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding awkward phrases like 'keen in trust' and reduce redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence and then add specific reasons using linking words for coherence.

範例: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading books. Moreover, it helps me gain different types of knowledge, such as about history and culture.

建議: Make your answer more concise and coherent by using linking words and avoiding repetition. Provide specific examples of what you read to enrich your answer.

範例: When I visit the library, I usually read many books. For example, I enjoy learning about traditional culture and history, which broadens my understanding.

建議: Improve fluency by avoiding repetition and using correct tense. Start with a clear topic sentence and explain your opinion with reasons using linking words.

範例: To be honest, I did not like going to the library when I was a child because I found reading books quite boring at that time.

建議: Clarify your answer and avoid contradictory statements. Use linking words to explain your opinion clearly and provide specific reasons.

範例: In my opinion, nowadays, not many Chinese children go to the library because they prefer playing outdoor or indoor games instead of reading books.

× Definitely, I often go to the library because I'm keen in trust to read the books, because with the help of it I can get a different type of knowledge.

✓ Definitely, I often go to the library because I'm keen to read the books, as with its help I can get different types of knowledge.

The phrase 'keen in trust to read the books' is incorrect. The correct preposition after 'keen' is 'to' when expressing eagerness to do something. Also, 'with the help of it' is better expressed as 'with its help'. Additionally, 'a different type of knowledge' should be pluralized to 'different types of knowledge' to indicate variety.

× Whenever I go to the library that time I like to read plenty of books because I earlier mentioned with the help of this I can get a different kind of knowledge like a traditional culture, history and so on.

✓ Whenever I go to the library, I like to read plenty of books because, as I mentioned earlier, with its help I can get different kinds of knowledge like traditional culture, history, and so on.

The phrase 'I earlier mentioned' should be 'as I mentioned earlier' for correct word order and clarity. 'With the help of this' is better as 'with its help'. Also, 'a different kind of knowledge' should be pluralized to 'different kinds of knowledge' to indicate variety. The phrase 'a traditional culture' should be 'traditional culture' without the article 'a'.

× To be honest, when I when I was a child, that time I don't like to go to the library because I think reading books is very boring for me.

✓ To be honest, when I was a child, I didn't like to go to the library because I thought reading books was very boring for me.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since the time referred to is in the past ('when I was a child'), the verbs should be in the past tense: 'don't like' should be 'didn't like', and 'think' should be 'thought'. Also, 'that time' is unnecessary and can be omitted for clarity.

× According to me, nowadays no one like no one. Children like to go to the library because they give more preference to play outdoor or indoor games rather than reading books.

✓ According to me, nowadays no one likes to go to the library. Children prefer playing outdoor or indoor games rather than reading books.

The phrase 'no one like no one' is incorrect and redundant; it should be 'no one likes to go to the library'. 'Like' should be 'likes' to agree with the singular subject 'no one' (subject-verb agreement). Also, 'they give more preference to play' is awkward; it should be 'they prefer playing' or 'they prefer to play'. The corrected sentence uses 'prefer playing' for natural expression.