图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Javobingizni yanada aniq va ravon qilish uchun, gaplaringizni sodda va to'g'ri tuzishga harakat qiling. Masalan, vaqtni aniq ko'rsating va sabablarni tushunarli qilib bayon eting. Shuningdek, keraksiz so'zlarni olib tashlang.

範例: I don't often go to the library because I have a baby. However, recently I have been going more often when I have free time.

建議: Javobingizni yanada aniq va mantiqiy qilish uchun, bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalaning va gaplaringizni qisqa va aniq qiling. Shuningdek, nima qilishingizni aniqroq tushuntiring.

範例: When I go to the library, I usually read fiction books and do my homework. I especially focus on practicing my reading and listening skills.

建議: Javobingizni grammatik jihatdan to'g'ri va ravon qilish uchun, o'tgan zamon fe'llarini to'g'ri ishlating va gaplarni mantiqiy bog'lang. Misollar keltirish orqali javobni boyiting.

範例: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid, especially the school library because it was near my home. I enjoyed reading many books there.

建議: Javobingizni aniq va grammatik jihatdan to'g'ri qilish uchun, ifoda va so'zlarni to'g'ri tanlang. Shuningdek, fikringizni mantiqiy tarzda bayon qiling va keraksiz so'zlardan qoching.

範例: I am not sure about all Chinese kids, but I think many of them often go to the library. This helps them to improve their knowledge.

× And today's I am.

✓ And today I am.

The phrase 'today's' is a contraction of 'today is', which is incorrect in this context. The correct form is 'today' as an adverb indicating the current day.

× I didn't often go to the library and however at last time times I often went to the library.

✓ I don't often go to the library, but recently I have been going more often.

The original sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly and uses awkward phrasing. 'Didn't often go' should be 'don't often go' to match the present context, and 'at last time times' is unclear; 'recently' is a better choice.

× That's why because I have a baby so I couldn't.

✓ That's because I have a baby, so I couldn't go.

The phrase 'That's why because' is redundant; either 'That's why' or 'Because' should be used. Also, the sentence lacks clarity and completeness; adding 'go' clarifies the meaning.

× If I go to the library, uh, most time I, umm, read fiction books, uh, do my homework special, especially out practicing out, uh, reading and listening.

✓ If I go to the library, most of the time I read fiction books and do my homework, especially practicing reading and listening.

The phrase 'most time' should be 'most of the time'. 'Special' is incorrect here; 'especially' is appropriate. The phrase 'practicing out' is incorrect; 'practicing' alone suffices. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct adverb placement.

× Yes, of course I went to the library when I were a kid.

✓ Yes, of course I went to the library when I was a kid.

The subject 'I' requires the verb 'was' in the past tense, not 'were'. 'Were' is used with plural subjects or in subjunctive mood.

× Childhood time, especially at schools library.

✓ During my childhood, especially at the school library.

The original sentence is a fragment lacking a verb. Adding 'During my childhood' and specifying 'the school library' completes the sentence.

× Additionally, I went most time I went.

✓ Additionally, I went most of the time.

The phrase 'most time I went' is incorrect; 'most of the time' is the correct adverbial phrase. The repetition of 'I went' is unnecessary.

× To tell stress, I haven't fully information about Chinese kids however, in the point of view, yes, Chinese kids often go to the library that's why Chinese people's knowledge is developed today's.

✓ To be honest, I don't have full information about Chinese kids; however, from my point of view, yes, Chinese kids often go to the library, which is why Chinese people's knowledge has developed today.

'To tell stress' is incorrect; 'To be honest' is appropriate. 'Haven't fully information' should be 'don't have full information'. 'In the point of view' should be 'from my point of view'. 'That's why' should be connected properly with the previous clause. 'Developed today's' is incorrect; 'has developed today' is correct.