图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but a bit repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to connect your sentences smoothly. Also, be careful with grammar and sentence structure to make your answer more natural.

範例: No, I don't often go to the library because I don't feel comfortable there. Instead, I prefer using my mobile phone to read news and watch movies, which suits my interests better.

建議: Your answer has good content but needs better sentence structure and linking words to improve clarity. Avoid repeating words like 'libraries' and use more precise vocabulary. Also, check grammar to make your answer more fluent.

範例: I usually read nonfiction books in the library because it offers a vast variety of genres. Moreover, I enjoy the cozy and peaceful environment, which helps me concentrate better.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas logically and use correct tenses. Also, avoid confusing phrases and be specific about your experience.

範例: No, I didn't have the chance to visit a library when I was a kid because I lived in a rural area where there was no library. I first went to a library when I was five years old.

建議: Your answer is relevant but needs better grammar and linking words to improve flow. Avoid repeating words and use more precise expressions. Also, clarify your points with smoother transitions.

範例: Yes, Chinese parents are quite strict and ensure their children visit the library every day after school. They follow a routine where the child reads a book and is expected to finish it within a week before starting a new one.

× I use mobile phone for readings and I usually see news and the movies of the.

✓ I use my mobile phone for reading and I usually watch news and movies on it.

The phrase 'use mobile phone for readings' is incorrect; 'reading' is uncountable and 'mobile phone' needs a possessive pronoun 'my'. Also, 'see news and the movies of the' is awkward; 'watch news and movies on it' is correct. Prepositions 'for' and 'on' are used properly here.

× I usually read nonfiction books in the libraries and libraries have has really vast variety of books including every genre, and I really enjoy them because the surrounding is so cozy and comfortable and it's really settled.

✓ I usually read nonfiction books in libraries, and libraries have a really vast variety of books including every genre. I really enjoy them because the surroundings are so cozy and comfortable and really peaceful.

The sentence has plural and singular inconsistencies: 'libraries have has' is incorrect; 'have' is correct for plural. 'The surrounding' should be plural 'surroundings'. Also, 'settled' is not appropriate here; 'peaceful' or 'calm' fits better.

× No, I had. I didn't get any chance to visit a library, even because I lived in a rural area.

✓ No, I didn't. I didn't get any chance to visit a library because I lived in a rural area.

'I had' is incomplete and incorrect here; the negative past tense 'I didn't' fits the question. 'Even because' is incorrect; 'because' alone suffices.

× There had there was no library in my city.

✓ There was no library in my city.

The phrase 'There had there was' is redundant and incorrect. The correct form is 'There was' to indicate existence in the past.

× So I went library for seven first when I was five years old.

✓ So I first went to the library when I was five years old.

The sentence structure is incorrect. 'Went library for seven first' is confusing. The correct structure is 'I first went to the library when I was five years old.'

× They make sure their that their children go library every day after school.

✓ They make sure that their children go to the library every day after school.

The verb 'go' requires the preposition 'to' before a place. 'Go library' is incorrect; it should be 'go to the library'.

× They make sure their that their children go library every day after school.

✓ They make sure that their children go to the library every day after school.

The phrase 'their that their' is redundant and incorrect. It should be 'make sure that their children'.

× They have the proper routine of going there and reading a book, and the child must complete a book within a week and start a new book after next week.

✓ They have a proper routine of going there and reading a book, and the child must complete a book within a week and start a new book the following week.

'The proper routine' should be 'a proper routine' as it is not a specific known routine. 'After next week' is awkward; 'the following week' is better.